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Shadowbane


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All Of Your Love, which is, indeed, the prequel to this story right here.
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The story is that you, a brony human, have been placed in the Equestrian world. You have already been with Queen Chrysalis and, surprisingly (and maybe a little bit disturbingly), all three of the Cutie Mark Crusaders - but, your Queen has left on a long journey, and the Crusaders obviously did not want any long-term relationship. What are you left with? A cave full of changelings. You've got a bunch of pent-up emotion and lust building up thanks to Chrysalis's absence, but no-one to share it with. You hope your Queen won't mind if you slip out for a while and meet a new pony or two for a one-night stand...
At least, you hope it's a one-night stand.

The beginning's way tame and not incredible, but trust me - the chapters will get better and longer the farther down a path you get.
I've made it relatively easy to tell which path leads to whom, but maybe you won't be able to tell what'll come from certain actions.

This is a LITE clopfic, meaning there is little actual sex unless you pick all the right options for it. The main portion of this clopfic resides in romance and drama.
This is also the first time I test out hyperlinking inside of a story, so I want you bros to tell me whether I should keep it or not. I plan to keep it mostly serious, except for maybe a few surprise endings in a couple of the branches.

This story can be about romancing Celestia or about romancing Luna, or even about having them both at the same time - by some tricks of luck you may even pursue the legendary Daring-Do, who was previously thought to be fictional, or the slightly-confused mail pegasus Derpy Hooves, Octavia the refined yet terrific cellist, or even the infamous traveling magician, the Great and Powerful Trixie!

With so many tastes satisfied, from the two sister alicorns to daring ponies to clueless pegasi to all-powerful unicorns, I hope you'll enjoy this one.
Also, I'm probably a faggot for starting another story before the other one is over, but whatever.
I'll make sure not to ruin anything from the prequel to this, but 100 percent guarantees are lies.

Chapters (16)
Comments ( 71 )

531822
Yes, of course, I update both of my two stories every day. Tomorrow, these three options and the other two in the castle will be unlocked - I'll have written them by then. Currently, however, I be working on my other story.

....
long description is long

533182
Yeah, sorry, was tryin' to get my point across.

I love this story :D

But entering sexual themes is awkard :/

Please, finish this! So far you can only get to, what, one page in for each option?
Looking forward to future updates!
EDIT: I'm an idiot. Sorry, didn't read all the comments. :/

535230
Check out my comment to The Diabolic Gnome. I don't plan to desert this fanfic - I'm doing a page more for every option (unless the option branch ends) daily. In fact, I'm working on that right now. But, fact is that I also have a bigger 4-chapter clopfic to work on, so I can't necessarily put all my time into this.

534828
Huh? Do you mean the part about Chrysalis and the CMCs? Or are you talking about how I put 'sex' on this fic?
...because there most certainly will be clop later :U

535267 Both ,but still dont stop because me ,it is a awesome job after all!:ajsmug:

536110
It's still going C: Check the Ponyville options, all of 'em are done 'cept for one, which I'm working on. After that, I'm doing the ones in the castle and heading to my other fic :eeyup:

536125 Awesome bro!

I just dont like like the things like "Im the baad boy ":b

My opinion isnt much so take it away :twilightblush:

536145
I don't take opinions lightly - I'll usually act on them when some people have pointed out a specific thing a few times. If other people don't like that, I may change it a little.

i'm gonna come back and read it after its done.

i lost track of where i was

536778
Okay then, bro, but there'll probably be more than 100 chapters at the rate it's going.

536804
its better then getting confused all the time

Most of the links seem to be broken, and not just on this page.

Edit: Nevermind, just realized that the 'broken' links are for pages that aren't up yet.

541276
Yeah, I was just about to comment, "Story isn't done yet, bro", but ya got it :derpytongue2:
Sorry about that. This will get updated every day not counting days like today when I tell that I'm dedicating full days to my other fics.
... I've told like three people this already, I can't believe I keep forgetting to put it in the description...

the choice is obvious

I CHOOSE NUMBER 1

544802
Yeah
me too
but..
I wrote the second one anyway
against my will

Not sure what chapter to comment on, meh.
Already discovered all the options. It's okay if next time I check back there are 100 chapters, I want to get lost in my choices, so it's like a new adventure every time. :pinkiehappy:

545464
Yea, at the rate it's going I'll have over 100 and maybe somewhere close to 200. I plan to branch things out quite a bit - and that's not to mention my tendency to change things until it's just the way I like it; I could add any number of extra characters before I finally finish this. Which is why I'm finishing one branch at a time instead of doing the current sets of options for each.

545522 That sounds good, that way I can explore every option as it becomes available; coming back later, I might feel overwhelmed! :twilightsheepish:

oh my g--im almost afraid to see her reaction to 2nd choice........i mean her short if not accurate mono-luge makes me want to comfort her even more.....

*Repeatedly clicks on 'Go up stairs'*

*Nothing Happens*

....

*Continues clicking*

549494 548760
Yeah, I don't like that chapter much either. However, it is realistically what we've done to people we hate - kill them, rape them, etc. This is a somewhat-realistic story. Maybe brutal in places, but true to life.

549258
*writing that one now*

549258 546350
Finished that chapter - continue clicking.
Writing next one too, possibly one after that as well.

Good so far!

#2 -- Full Steam Ahead!

number two plox.

Ugh both paths towards the princesses are not ready yet damn.:pinkiecrazy:
But still liking the idea of choose your way story in clpofic

Yeah, I'm doing one or two branches a day. I might do some of Luna's, but Celestia's hard to work with unless I use my headcanon of her. And trust me, you don't want to fuck with that sadistic version of mine :U

Why not all three?
*bunch of Mexicans lift me up and parade me around cheering*

560342
:rainbowlaugh: I loved that commercial.

560312

Why not canon Celestia with bits-o-fanon? Kind and gentle with a great love of pranks! :trollestia: Really, she should be the easiest since her character is fleshed out a lot more than canon Luna's.

560342

*Joins the Mexicans waving a giant foam finger*. :pinkiehappy:

Wow really you take us all the way here and then dont continue.

560642
...Really?
Am I your slave or something? It'll get done soon, so be patient, damn it. :ajbemused:
Just don't read it, if you don't like my inconstant updating.

560433
Hm, I dunno. Honestly, I actually enjoy Luna a lot more and get her more. Celestia seems to be this all-knowing god-character, with little-to-no flaws in comparison to all the other ponies which have a reasonable amount of issues. She'll be hard.

561148 now dont go biting off my head but i kinda meant it as in you should focus on one arc of the story at a time... im hust saiyan:ajbemused:

Sadly i kinda lold at second choice TIMETRAVELITISTHEN!:facehoof:
Like a twilight

561543
What does it look like I'm doin', pardner? I've been doing nothing but Derpy's arc for a while. Even if I add a couple Luna chapters now and then, it won't change the mix much.

569971
Because. I'm a sadistic dick. :pinkiecrazy:

Decisions, decisions. Luna or Celestia?

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