• Member Since 29th Apr, 2012
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Alexander Jack


I'm an amateur writer, trying to improve upon my skill by writing fan-fiction and getting feedback from those who read.

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A mysterious event arouses the attention of the main six, stirring them from their peaceful selves. Something fell in the everfree forest, something that has not been seen for a very long time. No-pony knows what it is, except for a very important trio, whom choose to keep this important secret. Well...important, for one of them.

As should have been fore-mentioned: This writing is based on material that i do not own, and is property to Hasbro, and the creators of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. ect ect, just don't say i was stealing their work, mkay?

P.S - It had completely skipped my mind, so my bad. http://sageemerald.deviantart.com/ <----- This guy is the one that drew my OC/ character on the cover here, i suggest you check out his deviantart page.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 14 )

hmm.... i find this intresting. i will need a visual aid of this guy sounds like a spartan with the armor but i feel he looks much more hardcore ^^ ow and first!! :rainbowkiss:

well this is moveing fast.. i think you need a proof reader thats the only thing i can say as i cant spell for buck! ^^
but still, i hope the story unravels well

550469 Where do you think she came from if she didn't?

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I don't remember any pony getting fatter

I KNEW that his 'friend' was The Doctor!!!

I said it was The Doctor. Victory! :pinkiehappy:

HAH!!! FIRST!!! FINALLY:flutterrage:
buut its a nice story, though i dont see why he didnt use his soularmorthingymogizmo against the golem or when the went into the cave, but like i said earlier(or is it typed?:derpytongue2:) its a nice story

1227376 Maybe they will meet again in Equestria :pinkiehappy:

Im going to consider this completed. I have to say that this was one of the better reads ive come across in a very long time.

Since I only came across it by sheer accident, I have to say that Im glad that I was able to read it.

If the Author never does finish this, I have to say that this chapter makes the perfect ending point for this story. Its just a perfect ending.

The Monk
“To say that Twilight Sparkle went bugfuck would be like saying the Incredible Hulk had some mild anger management issues.” -DustTraveller

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