In this Story Princess Celestia has been kidnapped. Princess Luna calls upon the Mane 6 and assigns Princess Cadence to Rule over Equestria while she added in the attempt to rescue her sister, both to make sure she was safe and to clear her name from Nightmare Moon. Also please note that Chrysalis and Celestia both will not be in the story until Chapter 4.
The Mane 6 will be put through several trials, and there will be violence towards the end of the story. (There wasn't a listing for that on the content rating, so I went with Gore even though there will be very little blood.) There is also the possibility of death, I haven't officially decided. There is a new villain at work though in the Land of Equestria. One that could very well be it's undoing if the mane 6 should fail.
Good story
Really good. The rest of the story seems promising. Cant wait!
I'll read this later as it looks good
I will edit later with my thoughts
"I have got a bad feeling about this"
"Boy, you always got a bad feeling about-"
"Sarge!"
"Protect me, cone"
TODAY IS A GOOD DAY TO DIE!
more damn you!
MOOOORRRRE!
Thank you for the comments. I'm trying to at the very least get an update in every week. This update took longer than expected due to me being sick but should be back on schedule now.
Before the story:
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AW! HOW CUTE!
SWEET!
Dang, with all that build up, and the addition of Ice Storm into the story, I figured she would have saved the day and perhaps become an Element herself. She just seemed to kind of... fall out of the story right after Deadly Revenge tried to kill her.
Again, thanks to everyone for all of the comments.
@Tales:
Really? I hadn't been aware that I had been building Ice up that much. She was only meant to be a supplemental character, and I had gotten some reviews from a couple of others that said I hadn't built her up enough. Might try to re-work it to where she has a bit more of an impact then in the fight, though for many reasons, I still need Luna to be in the position she ended up in.
Well. It was a little blocky where the dialogue was concerned, at least so far. Candence is extremely OOC, though Luna seems rather well-done, if a little subdued. The Main 6 are a little OOC, too, but it's just enough to detract from the story without ruining it. Dialogue seems a little... flat. yes, that's probably it. And, while it's nicely lain out, the chapter could do with a little fleshing out. Instead of having 'they went, they came' etc, a little more description would give this a lot.
You know, I think it's the first fic I've read where Cadance is wary of Luna. Kinda refreshing.
The style is okay, some clunkiness here and there, but nothing that'd pull me out of the story.
Cya
Raziel-chan
Quick pace, but so far so good. Some small clunkiness and typos.
Cya
Raziel-chan
Yay, Chryssie!