Shining Armor a apprentice to a blacksmith, soon finds out that he must aquire the three pendants of virtue and the Master Sword. As he begins to save his home he gains help from several friends and soon he defeats the wizard and finds out there is more to his journey.
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this is A Legend of Zelda: A Link between Worlds crossover
The legend of Zelda is property and trademarked by Nintendo. i take no credit for the main basis of the story. all the zelda items that are changed name wise still belong to Nintendo.
This is epic. Thought there are a few grammar mistakes
...This is not a prologue.
This is a small paragraph telling us about the dreams of an AU Shining Armor that are written with very bad grammar.
Oh look, an OC who's apprentice was Shining Armor. Garbage!
Before Reading:
Description:
Oh. My. God. I've never seen such bad grammar, but I believe I have. Instead of using "=" you can use the hr tag. You didn't seem to care about proper capitalization at all. *Zelda *I *This, instead of "a" you should use "an". Why did you capitalize a?
Chapters:
They are too short and the prologue is only fifty-two words long.
From what I have read so far, I can tell there will be lots of grammar errors. I'm not looking forward to reviewing the rest of your chapters. ~Silver Spoon
5430435 Few? I think you mean a lot.
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I know, i have grammar issues, i'm looking for an editor