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jwizard


Still a fan of most fics involving Twilight, but not as new. Still a little wet behind the ears as an author though.

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Applejack and Rarity have been dancing around the idea that they're attracted to each other, and everypony can see it. Twilight, not being an expert, gets so frustrated about the tension that she decides to enlist Rainbow Dash's help in getting the two to 'let off some steam'. In the course of their planning, however, Twilight begins to realize that she herself has some deep-seated feelings for the brash Pegasus mare. How does a freshly-minted alicorn princess deal with new feelings like this?

I'm just a hopeless romantic, so excuse this if it seems trite or unpolished. Rated T for teen for suggestive conversations, and some sexy kissing. No clop. I can't write clop quite yet.

My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic is not owned by me. All characters in this fic are used in accordance with free use laws. I only lay claim to the arrangement of the words, and any OC's I may create for this fic. (I don't have any planned, but you know muses; they have minds of their own... *SLAP* OW!! dammit...)

Note: Unlike my other stories, this one isn't likely to have any imaginative names for the chapters. It's simply too short for anything like that; I expect it to be no more than four or five chapters in length, with less than three thousand words a chapter.

In other words, just a fairly short romantic fluff piece.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 11 )

Good on ya, mate! Great job!

Twilight's note to Rainbow continues into Rainbow's monologue.

7315697

:facehoof:

Thank you for pointing that out.

7315697

I fixed it. I forgot the end quote tag. I usually add the tags in the gdoc for each chapter that I write.

Still, thanks for catching that. Um, you interested in being a proof reader?

7315852 How would you know that I'm a good proof-reader? I just pointed out one obvious detail, and from what I've read in this one chapter, you have no need of one; I see very few errors if any at all.

7316701

Because you spotted what I missed. That's all I really want.

Besides, I'm not asking you to do it before I post a chapter or anything. I do all my own editing.

No, if you see a mistake, just politely point it out.

That's all.

By the way, thanks for that unsolicited praise at the end. I go to great lengths to make sure I make as few mistakes as possible. Often, I don't spot the most obvious ones because I'm either in a hurry or overtired.

7316807 It's what I do normally. Most of the time I just gloss over the small incorrect sentence structure, but since you're asking I suppose I can point out what few errors I'll find. Also, you're welcome on the compliments. I enjoy giving praise to great work such as yours. It saddens me greatly that I see so many people becoming more and more illiterate; therefore, it is a blessing to see an individual as articulate as yourself.

You know, for a fluff piece, this one is certainly getting a lot of traction. 11 likes and only 3 dislikes.

Is this ever going to be done? It hasn't been touched in nearly a year and I don't wanna start it if it isn't going to get updates if I'm honest....

The rarijack is alluring I must say, but if it's been abandoned, then please let us know? (Cancelled perhaps?)

8180782

Sorry, but I have no plans to work on this one any time soon for a couple of reasons.

First is because I've been focusing on other fics.

The second is the reason I stopped in the first place; I ran into a rather bad case of writer's block with it.

So, it' pretty much is on hiatus at the moment, at least until I can get past the block.

I am supremely disappointed in myself for not finding this sooner.

TwiDash? That I haven’t read? Heresy.:rainbowlaugh:

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