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Ganein
So many stories to read...so little time to read them...
Ganein
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Okay, first off, the description doesn't draw me in. It is long and tedious. Believe me, I had this problem with my stories too. The writing is slightly confusing and could use some brushing up. But overall, the idea isn't bad, you just need experience. Writing stories is challenging and I applaud you for your effort and dedication. The tags also are confusing, if the fic is mainly about ponies, don't use human or Anthro and so on. Also, The characterization is off a bit on some of the characters. If you are looking for an editor/proofreader/pre-reader, I could maybe help or point you to the right guy.
5461167 you da real mvp
Yo imma add some input, the description is to long. Your characters are fine it just seems like you have described everything that they are doing/thinking. Try to compress the interactions but do not leave out detail. And so far I have no clue if everyone is human or just the space pirates
6061158 Well, there's an anthro tag for a reason.
Another F.C story.
I'm a sucker for these.
I need more.
+1
6352670 It's comments like this that make me want to keep writing. Thanks.