The cybernectic leader of an advanced, miltaristic and nomadic group of outcasts that wander the stars meets an unpredictable outcome that lands him on the surface of Equestria. What will happen to him when he encounters beings he could never imagine
Yo imma add some input, the description is to long. Your characters are fine it just seems like you have described everything that they are doing/thinking. Try to compress the interactions but do not leave out detail. And so far I have no clue if everyone is human or just the space pirates
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Yo imma add some input, the description is to long. Your characters are fine it just seems like you have described everything that they are doing/thinking. Try to compress the interactions but do not leave out detail. And so far I have no clue if everyone is human or just the space pirates