The poems are my views on the frame of mind that Luna goes through as she spirals into despair and depression and her fight to keep herself from devolving back into Nightmare Moon.
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Creatures4Life
Never forget your beginnings, so you can see how far you've come.
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Very nice! Added to Sad Luna.
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Thank you for posting a Comment and I hope you were able to connect with Luna through this.
Edgy
I... actually saw you from the Self-Doubting Writer's support group, and, well, I thought I'd take a look through this wonderful story you wrote.
This is... a rather amazing origin on just what type of state a pony has to be to create this stuff of nightmares, after being one for so long.
I love every second of it, and even though it's sad, it makes the hope that Luna clings to at the end all the more potent. She knows of her darkness, her sins, and still looks to do good. She's haunted by the specters of her past, so much she's resigned herself to making another, and now she seeks to slay them. It really brings across the enigma Luna is, and what she can be, and what Pony Life might make her with the renewed focus on the originals.
But until then, we have Alone and Trapped. And you have my like, my favorite, and a watchful eye on anything else you create.
Thank you for bringing this to my grateful eyes.
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Hello,
Thank you for leaving such a loving, and detailed comment. I can relate to Luna on a lot of levels, but the main one is the fact that each of these have coincided with both how I believed she would feel, and the moments when I was at the lowest points in my life.
So having such a caring comment be written here after all these years really holds a very special place in my little pony heart. So thank you very much!
I am in the middle of creating something rather large at the moment so I hope you can bear with me on the journey!
-Sincerely,
Creatures4Life