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The Eclectic and the Orderly

Vinyl just finished an early gig in Canterlot when she returned home to find her apartment broken into and her equipment stolen. Having no way to pay for her apartment anymore, she is forced to stay with an old acquaintance, Octavia, until she can get back on her hooves and get settled again.

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SiIver Spoon

SiIver Spoon #1 · Dec 23rd, 2014 · · · Chapter 1: The Encounter ·

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After completing a early gig in Canterlot Vinyl Scratch encounters an unexpected pony on her way back to her apartment.

Correction: After completing an early gig in Canterlot, Vinyl Scratch encounters an unexpected pony on the way back to her apartment. Okay, let me offer some logic. Vinyl lives in Ponyville, not Canterlot. I believe Octavia lives there too, because she is believed to be her roommate. Can this description be longer? It seems as if your story will lack commas, or have no commas at all.

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