A crazy military fan who ironically loves guns and peace all at the same time
Waking up with the last memory of drinking at college party, A brony finds himself in equestria with no memories of how he got there in the first place, and not only that but finds that he is for some reason or another, now an alicorn of all things but with no grasp of magic. As he manages to settle into ponyville, how will the inhabitants handle having a male alicorn living amongst them and how will he handle the coming chaos his presence will bring?
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Tip: Nobody likes an alicorn OC
Self insertion at it's worst, everyone!
Show, don't tell. This was like reading a checklist.
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Ah, if it isn't my mortal enemy, the Brony in Equestria genre. And what's this? You've brought a friend? The Alicorn OC Main Character genre?
And like that down vote.
to those showing me no love, I have this to say...... oh well HGH
Awesome!!!
5426690 thanks for the tip, don't know how that one slipped in there but thanks
O.o
Tackle sends pony through wall.
Shitty wall creation.
Your pic would make Andy Warhol throw a violent fit, and the 'writing' would compel Jane Austen to throw herself over Niagara Falls in a barrel.
A good example of how to do a brony turned alicorn oc correctly is Destiny's call by Zenith Starwalker.
You might want to Edit this chapter, I know for a fact that bad grammar tends to annoy people and while I think the premise is good enough to keep on reading I find it sad that awesome ideas like this will fall into oblivion because of bad grammar. Keep going and you will eventually get it right (and in a worst case senario you could get a profreader) hope you have a good day and I will keep on reading looking good so far.
I myself cannot read this. Its an intersting idea but the pacing is just way to fast for me; it draws me out of the story rather then pulling me in...