When Twilight and her friends cast a spell they are cast in a world where all life is extinct. A minuscule amount of ponies are still living, surviving against the threats that lie out of the world. Will they survive?
I love Derpy because derpy is best pony EVER!
When Twilight and her friends cast a spell they are cast in a world where all life is extinct. A minuscule amount of ponies are still living, surviving against the threats that lie out of the world. Will they survive?
Hey guys just saying. I need a person to be my editor. Please help guys :)
BTW from what I can see, there is two author note spaces.
Not a bad concept at all, but like you said, it definitely needs an editor. There's a lot of moderate errors in terms of grammar, alongside some issues with dialogue and characterization. Overall, you've got a good idea, so you'd better run with it.
Thanks!