just as i finish the first chapter, the second one is added.

5401724 Whoops, thanks. Didn't catch that.

Yes.

I'm not sure if I should be laughing my ass off, be aroused, or both.

Must have moar pweese

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The day I willingly write those two in a story is the day I kill myself.

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/shrug
To each their own. Me, I'm not getting the stud-Spike hype at all^^

My thoughts on this fic thus far...

I never played traditional spin the bottle. In me and my friends version we used a bottle of heavy alcohol and whoever it pointed at had to drink the whole bottle. That game is part of the reason why I can now drink almost anyone in the world under the table.

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MOAR!!

>aged-up humanized Ponyville kids in what appears to be a pending longform clopfic

Get the fuck out of my head.

"The Crusader?"
Apple Bloom and Scootaloo glanced over at Sweetie Belle, who was sitting contently, her arms crossed over her lap.
"Shit," Scootaloo muttered, "that's good."

Bitch, please,
The Calvary

Eh, story's alright. It's just sex, jokes, and a mix of the two, but that's what you'd expect from this kind of story.

5403502 To be fair,It didn't exactly claim to be an epic saga...and the characterization is fairly good,in my humble opinion.

5403619 True. I always have my expectations too high. Whenever I see a story like this, I read it for the premise and the madness leading up to the main event, which I know is entirely the wrong reason when the point of the story isn't to tell a story.

Ha! This made me smile a lot more than I thought it would, its saucy and just comedic enough to make me like it a lot. Good work my friend.

"Why do I keep getting girls?" she moaned, rubbing her temples.

I am very happy with Scootaloo's response down the road as it's almost the same thing I would have told my friend if I was in Scootaloo's position.

"Oh, shut up and roll, Apple Bloom!" Scootaloo grumbled. "Blame your genes for making you so appealing to women."

Scootaloo is such a fun character.

DT in this fic is just incredibly awesome. DT and Sweetie Belle just make too good a pair at teasing their friends. This is what real friendship is, that comfortability and openness with each other, it's something really special. I think you caught that wonderfully in this fic.

And that that ending to the chapter was a very lovingly heartwarming surprise! Loved that.

5402850 Hey, me too. I got that far, realized I wasn't connecting with any of the characters or the writing style, and gave up. It doesn't take much to keep me interested in a clopfic. But don't bore me, please.

Wow, this got real popular real fast. I love how you've written DT here. I think her wittiness is criminally underplayed in the show, and it's nice to see someone who can write her with her hair down. Also, teenage CMC is my absolute favourite!

Pipsqueak is my favorite character so far

I love this story!! Lmao

"What?" Sweetie Belle said innocently. "I'm an ass girl. Not my fault you've got a donk."

Me likes Sweetie the best.

Why do I imagine Pipsqueak sounding like Karl Urban as Billy Butcher?