Twilight Sparkle has been sent from Canterlot to Ponyville for survivors. They want to be friends, while Twilight wants to live. Then Twilight finds out her ride back to Canterlot is missing. She realizes the only way back is with a group. And with the help of these 6 ponies, a magical gun named Bertha, and Spike the commando, Twilight might be able to fight her way back to Canterlot, and stop the destroying of Equestria before it's too late.
**Slight Gore**
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Something worse than zombies? hmm.... all in all, it's not bad for something off an iPod but it is a buit rushed and lacks spacing... there's also the need to delve into the details of the personality changes of all involved in this alternate universe as well, but that could theoretically wait.
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The plot was rushed because of the deep second chapter.
Notice I didn't mention Code Apple, or Rainbow Dash.
I couldn't get past Spikes
dual Uzi flamethrowers. 
Also, it's a good thing to break these blocks of text into amillion bite sized paragraphs. Otherwise, we get overwhelmed by the constant line of no breaks.
Lastly, the first section was going at a pretty good pace! But then, I personally think you jumped into the action much too quickly after that.
It could be because I just finished season 2 of the walking dead, but I must critisize Twilights insertion plan. It would've been better to stop at the outskirts of town, and slowly and surely fight your way into it, rather than drop yourself f*ckin dead center of zombie central.
i'm being knit picky here but before i read this is zombism a real word?
because i would like to use it in life but don't know if its correct
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It's a real word.
I'm sorry about the action jump.
It was made so that you, the audience, could get a better grasp of the differences between the show and the story.
Yay! I thought you had given up on this fic, nice to see I was wrong.
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The story has only begun.
I had a 3k word chapter, read it over, and then realized it was crap.
I rewrote the entire thing....
And edited it meticulously.
A brother's eye spots all, as in this case he was my temp. editor.
hmm am i the test pony?
1006772
Somewhat.
(Not really, as it's in depth later. >:D)
jeebus
pretty scary
HOLY BUCKING CHRIST
HOW DARE YOU MAKE TROLLESTIA
yous dah ebil genius
whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa??????????????????????????/
1585972
Wut? Y u so confuzzled?
why you so evil?
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How DARE you!
I'm not evil; I.. just... enjoy gore from time to time!
Yeah! That's it.
oh ok srry but still
y trollestia?
1602166
Y not?
Also, where is the trollestia in this? I fail to see it. lol
she is right here in this part [If he died,
I don't feel like sending you a new one.
lolol./i]
1605608
Alright, I guess...
I wrote this on my entry to the fandom (hence the writing quality) and the themes Arnold...
Alright?