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Final Sunlight


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Sunset Shimmer has been having bad pains that she wrote off as more lovely bonuses of her human form having a period every single month. The truth is much worse though as she finds out and tries to keep it from the group of friends she wants to be a part of, even if she tries to pretend she doesn't want anything to do with them a lot of the time. Her secret will cost her her very life.

Fluttershy has her own secrets, secrets that can either save Sunset or doom them both. Secrets that will show that not only did she bend the two most important rules in her life, she completely destroyed them. If she tells Sunset, she could risk bringing death down upon them both.

And finally Celestia herself, she always reminded Sunset of her ex-mentor from Equestria. It wasn't just her looks, but the way she acted at times. How she seemed as if she had lived for centuries much like her counterpart which was impossible as humans were not immortal. Celestia seems very worried about Sunset and wants to help herself, but when she learns someone beat her to the punch, will she offer protection from others or do what her job demands of her?

My Little Pony was created by Lauren Faust and is owned by Hasbro.
Secret Vampire was written by L. J. Smith.
This story is set just after the first Equestria Girls movie and will have heavy influence from L.J. Smith's books. There will most likely not be any characters from Smith's books in this story other than a few mentions of names.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 49 )

Awesome first chapter. I'm interested in seeing where this goes.

5369130 Woot, my first comment, thanks. I hope to make this story as awesome as I can, so don't forget to check back and let me know what you think.

5371871 I certainly will. It has promising beginnings so I look forward to further chapters. Original story too, which is always nice.

Comment posted by Twilight Nightmare deleted Dec 12th, 2014

5374271 please don't rush, I'd rather wait longer for better quality. This story does seem quality right now :)

5374300 Sorry, I was using Chrome instead of Firefox, so posted the reply using my brother's account instead of mine. It's awesome that you like my story, and like I said under my brother's account, that he will probably kill me over, I plan to try and write a chapter everyday. I have to share the computer though until we can afford a new tower, so it depends how long I can get the notebook for.

5374317 wish I could do a chapter a day. Might I interest you in my Scootaloo vampire story?

5374321 Awesome! I love Scootaloo, so I'll steal my brother's tablet when I finish writing today's chapter and check it out!

5374330 Its called Scootaloo, dark angel. Hope you like it

5374342 Ugh, 3/4 of the way done with the next chapter and my brother wanted the computer to check his forum posts. Good side to it, I can use his tablet to check out your story, woot!

5374424 hope you like it, had a lot of fun writing it.

5374459 I loved it, it rocked!

5374651 as I did yours, cancer is a tricky topic and you handled it nicely

5374667 Thankies, but it was one of the points i actually pulled from Secret Vampire. It's what was wrong with Poppy, but the same things won't be happening beyond sharing the disease and being helped overcome it.

Love it, this story is so awesome!

I'm really interested.... This is amazing!

5374808 Thankies, happy that you find my story awesome!

5375194 Thankies, it's awesome that you are interested in my story!

How is it I keep loving this story more and more?

She was also sure that Sunset felt the same which was the whore reason the girl was such a bully.

This typo. Oh my sweet Celestia that typo! :applejackconfused:

5378253 Thankies, it's awesome how you are enjoying this story!

5378628 :derpytongue2: Crap, crap , crap! I fixed the typo, damn I can't believe I had a typo that bad, thankies!

5378913 why wouldn't i? It's shaping up to be one of the best I've read in a long time

A moustache for you!:moustache:6

5382502 Thankies, though I'd look really weird with a moostache lol. :rainbowlaugh:

Brilliant as ever. Lovely descriptions on the feeding and bloodletting. Love it

Top class chapter, as always you don't disappoint :)

Gets better and better

5394170 Thankies so much, its awessome that you love it so far!

This is sooo good >.< You made me cry :fluttercry: But I like where this is going, and I like your writing. In other words: soooo awesome! :rainbowkiss:

Can't wait for more! :pinkiehappy:

"Well, if it isn't Eric fucking Northman"

I had the theme song stuck in my head the whole time.

I can kinda understand that particular kick to the nuts.:fluttershysad:

Damn this just gets better and better :)

This is amazing! Damn you have skills. :rainbowkiss:

My only question is... did the Elements of Harmony give her this cancer? :fluttercry:

5406308 :pinkiehappy:

5427782 Thankies, it's awesome that you like the story. :yay:

5465828 lol

5466107 Sorry if the story hit a little too close to home for some ponies, but I hope that you might still be able to enjoy the story.

5468162 Thankies, happy that you are enjoying! :scootangel:

5468355 lol thankies!

5509623 Nope, the elements actually didn't give her cancer. It's just something that sadly happened to her that she ignored for too long letting it advance so far that there was little to no hope of anything being done to save her. :fluttershysad:

Definitely interesting, I'll track this for now.

She wanted to walk out after finally getting the doctor to discharge her, but hospital regulations forbid it. Damned hospitals.

That isn't always the case. When my appendix ruptured, and after my week of in bed recovery from the surgery in the hospital, they let me walk out. I had to go slow but the nurses said it would be good for me as I had been in a bed from like 10 PM Sunday to almost noon Friday.

anyone from the future hoping that this will be finnished one day?

8374363
i am hoping it is finsihed 1 day to

Comment posted by DovahLord1233 deleted Dec 23rd, 2019

9355288
Good Lord that is an old comment. I don't even remember posting it. Jesus Christ.

whelp heres to hope that one day this gets continued and, finished.

*notices the fangs*

ah shit, here we go again

Just a little correction. In your disclaimer. You say "My Little Pony was created by Lauren Faust", which is wrong. She only created the "Frienship is Magic". (She also is a fan of the G1 MLP cartoon.)

Wikipedia claim the original toyline came first, created by Bonnie Zacherle. A few years later, Hasbro commissioned a TV special, then a second, an finally a cartoon. (Some of said cartoon being made by cutting the TV specials into episodes.)

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