Hi! My name is Blissful Vanity! (Or Sweet Pride...I mean they both are the same thing so. I mean that is if-....nevermind) I have a couple story ideas and I'm eager to share my (art) to everyone!
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It's not that bad I fav for now
5383262 Thanks alot! That means something to me!
It's ok. I like it. It's not too bad.
5384718 Thank you for reading it. I hope you'll stay tuned.
(*Ding Dong Motherfucker.* My door bell screamed at me.) suprise motherfucker!
So far, it's amazing. :) excited to see what happens next and Sonata is just adorbs!
This seems like an interesting idea, but there's a lot of grammatical problems with this.
Sonata squeezed right in surprisingly with no problem although it was kind of tight.
I can make so many jokes on that alone XD
5522766 Go on....
This is an interesting idea, but it could use a lot of clean-up. Here's some things you may want to edit.
Those should be "you've", "or" and "you're".
That should be a question mark.
That shouldn't be capitalized.
You repeated "said", and I suggest you change "used to be clean" to "formerly clean".
5536625 The problems have been corrected. Thank you for catching those.
I guess Sonata cranked down the thermostat as an excuse. silly Sowawa