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Blissful Vanity


Hi! My name is Blissful Vanity! (Or Sweet Pride...I mean they both are the same thing so. I mean that is if-....nevermind) I have a couple story ideas and I'm eager to share my (art) to everyone!

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It's not that bad I fav for now:trollestia:


5383262 Thanks alot! That means something to me! :twilightsmile:

It's ok. I like it. It's not too bad.

5384718 Thank you for reading it. I hope you'll stay tuned. :twilightsheepish:

(*Ding Dong Motherfucker.* My door bell screamed at me.) suprise motherfucker!

So far, it's amazing. :) excited to see what happens next and Sonata is just adorbs!

This seems like an interesting idea, but there's a lot of grammatical problems with this.

Sonata squeezed right in surprisingly with no problem although it was kind of tight.


I can make so many jokes on that alone XD

This is an interesting idea, but it could use a lot of clean-up. Here's some things you may want to edit.

"What makes you think that I want to turn you in? I don't even know who you are, what you done, and why your so defensive, but I can assure you that I'm not going to do anything."

Those should be "you've", "or" and "you're".

"So what is your group called."

That should be a question mark.

"What are you Doing!?"

That shouldn't be capitalized.

"About time you got here!" Sonata said said jumping on my, used to be clean, bed.

You repeated "said", and I suggest you change "used to be clean" to "formerly clean".

5536625 The problems have been corrected. Thank you for catching those. :twilightsmile:

I guess Sonata cranked down the thermostat as an excuse. silly Sowawa

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