529764 Yeah, I write in open office, and the take and not gave was just a product of my speed. Thanks for pointing that out, and I like to thing that I have good spelling, but spell check really halps!
This chapter was almost perfect. only complaints are a few too many commas in some places, and use of the word "cowered" (past tense of the word "cower") when I believe the word you meant to use was "coward" (derogatory term for one who is too frightened to do what they should do).
oh buck...
Aaaaaahhhhh shit gettin real
Luv it, keep continuining
Awesome, keep up the good work man.
This story rocks! I can't wait to see how it plays out!
Damn, that dream. Also, nice build-up you doing there rather than going like: "WELL HURP DURP ALIENS IN EQUESTRIA!".
529764 Yeah, I write in open office, and the take and not gave was just a product of my speed. Thanks for pointing that out, and I like to thing that I have good spelling, but spell check really halps!
529255 Well, I do that to add plot, and so you'll have a greater impact as I brutally kill them. You never know who's next!
531031 You are one of the sickest people that has ever lived. But your story makes up for it.
I can foresee Discord being a good guy in this story, because dead ponies are boring. Also Discord v. Aliens sounds like good times.
I hope Princess Celestia and Luna will live.
damn now i have the feeling to go play AVP cool story by the way bro
This chapter was almost perfect. only complaints are a few too many commas in some places, and use of the word "cowered" (past tense of the word "cower") when I believe the word you meant to use was "coward" (derogatory term for one who is too frightened to do what they should do).