It was the start of fall for Equestria, and everypony was looking forward to what the season will bring. For two young mares though, the will soon find their hearts falling in love.
nightlock. you always write good stuff. this shall be great
5370846 Thank you, I'm always to see people who enjoy my stories.
5371066 Still seems that I have a problem with my pacing. Bad habits die the hardest.
I agree with the pacing issue. I also enjoy Intel's personality when it's toned down like this every once in a while. I'll be watching.
Apparently I'm not following this... Fixing.
nightlock. you always write good stuff. this shall be great
5370846 Thank you, I'm always to see people who enjoy my stories.
5371066 Still seems that I have a problem with my pacing. Bad habits die the hardest.
I agree with the pacing issue. I also enjoy Intel's personality when it's toned down like this every once in a while. I'll be watching.
Apparently I'm not following this... Fixing.