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The Psychopath


My very first (self-published) book can be found on Amazon Kindle for 5 or 12 paperback! If you love dragons, give it a look! https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0CSM7QQ2M

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Father time looks over the lives of those who were the elements of harmony. The elements, now passed to a younger...more "present" generation, will certainly never know of the exploits of these ones. From Twilight becoming an alicorn, to Cadence dying from an unknown disease, Father time sees everything. He stops clocks while creating others and starting them, yet, the three clocks held in a golden container are those that will certainly never stop. Let the controller of time show you what has happened to poor Twilight Sparkle, princess of magic, throughout the cauldron of time.

This is my first attempt at making something sad. (Because someone said they didn't want to feel depressed again *trollface*.) Tell meh vat ya tink.

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Comments ( 21 )

513673 Oh come on! I take my time to think of these sort of things and discover someone who already thought of them before me. *fist shake*

*Tick...tock...tick...tock...tick.....................*

NO! Not Rainbow Dash! :fluttercry::fluttershbad::fluttershysad:


But well it wasn't very sad in my opinion ,but still you tried and I respect that.

But yes it was a little depressive to see Twilight lose all of her friends ,I can already imagine her pain when the news that the most loyal of her friends passed away ,so your mission of making someone depressed was somehow accomplished. :trollestia:

Actually ,I would like to know who'll be the new elements of Harmony? Since the element of Generosity, Kindness ,Honesty ,Loyalty and Laughter have died ,I wonder who'll be the new ones...So a sequel perhaps would be great to show the new ones ,and to perhaps a part where Celestia and Luna explain to Twilight what the two alicorns have made for 'minimize' the pain they to have feel when their loved ones passed away ,cause they lived already for 1000 years ,that's alot! Too i saw 'Time' say that the Creator wanted Twilight to be immortal ,I would like to know WHY he wanted it?

this was not sad enough, not a tearjerker by any means...

you're better off writing standard fiction and gore stories.....

513718 Meh. Oh well. I tried.

513728
I see immortal Twilight as happy :v

that was great! really liked this story, but i like most sad stories so this might be biased a bit...:moustache:

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still it wasn't too bad, I'm sure there are people who'd do worse... but it's just.... not your style I guess

513833 I like to experiment. I guess that this proved that I'm better with heart warming and awesome-style fics.

it would've been nice if we knew how she became and alicorn, and her thoughts on it told by her but as far as these things go you did a good job.

513839 I still think you did a really good job with this. I've always had a thing when stories personify- er, ponify things like this. Death, life, time, etc. All and all, a job well done.

513689 Just noticed your edited comment now, and you just gave me another idea. Great. That makes four in reserve now...the "From man to mare" sequel being with them.:trollestia:

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Me and giving ideas? :pinkiegasp: Is this possible? :pinkiecrazy:

547264 Pfff. It's me were talking about. I can get ideas from about anything. My whole life is centered around imagination, so this is a part of me that will never die out.:rainbowkiss:

547270

Hmmm wait is that one of the things we get by entering the world of illogic?

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Still it's not enough to give up my sanity! :pinkiecrazy:

Flurry Heart, the experiment. Can things truly be changed?

11873008
Good God. One of my earliest stories ever. I can't believe someone would still read them.

Eugh. That description is nasty.

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Oddly enough the "similar stories" on "How Does a God Die" had this story as one of the choices. It doesn't now, but it did soon after the story went up. I figured commenting to it would get the kind of reply it did seeing as the last comment on the story was 2012.

It did feel apt that breaking mother nature's prohibition on Cadance having foals would result in Flurry Heart though.

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I literally don't remember anything about this story.

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