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TacticalRainboom
I wrote some stories for you. I hope you enjoy them.
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er... shouldn't this technically have the crossover tag?
I was actually hoping from the title that it'd be some hot Sparity clopfic.
Well this is a crossover I can say I didn't see coming. I'll be sure to give this a read later.
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Missed that, thanks.
Oh dear god.
Well... This had potential, in my opinion.
Somehow, you despoiled Rarity in a clopfic... Which, I think is rather impressive.
I will profess openly to having read many clopfics, and other sundry versions of smut.
But, I mean, you went verbose and just... Honestly, I see little reason to just break out slang and just bleh...
It was kinda like watching someone vomit up a buffet... bleh...
The writing was okay, Just the verbosity and exhaustive application of slang killed it for me.
However, I won't mark this story down for such things.
So, consider it, and I wish you luck.
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The fact that you wanted this to be actually erotic is worrying ._.
Why are there so few product placement clopfics?
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