Nightmare Moon's Return, Discord's Freedom, The Changeling Invasion, all these events seemed to have simply been unfortunate occurences, and where quickly dealt with by Ponyville's own Mane Six. But there has always been someone behind them all, pulling the strings that led to their unleashings. Angered at the fact it's indirect afflictions have gone without results, this evil seeks to take matters into its own hooves.
The bond these six ponies have forged has proven yet unbreakable and unbeatable, but this may be the sharpest blow it will ever take. Can it survive, or will Equestria truely become, not a world of whimsy and randomness, but one of despair and utter ruin?
Chapters (4)
I've put this on my read later list. The premise sounds simply fantastic, and I hope to see more chapters in the near future for me to peruse in my free time.
Seems interesting to say the least. On my read later list!
I started reading it and added it to my read later list; it seems very good, but have you considered changing the formatting to be aligned on the left? It may just be me but it's annoying reading in the current centered format. Do whatever you see fit though!
Why Center Justify? Why?
You got me at the epic Twilight picture. SO much win. She's like a super sayin, but in pony form
Fixed the format, I centered it because I figured it would look neater, but then i looked again and it is annoying reading it that
anyway, glad u guys like what i have so far. 
Way to go. You almost had me in manly tears at a few spots.
Just a few awkward sentences, but great job so far. Only wish I heard more from Twilight in this scene. I thought she might join the Princesses side or call out with AJ, but this is your story and it's good.
513629 I actually would of thought that the pegasus-thiny would have called out to Twilight.
Great story! A few grammar and spelling errors in this and last chapter but it's okay.
Can't wait for more! Oh! And Rainbow and Soarin' is my new OTP.
I feel an awesome adventure tail coming on! I can't wait, pony!
"The winged Pegasus then continued" OMG ITS A WINGED PEGASUS I THOUGHT THAT WAS IMPOSSIBLE
might want to fix that
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I probably should've caught that, rookie mistake on my part
"Darkest Night." Does that mean "Batman." Bruce Wayne finds the greatest threat to Gothom city are the multicolored ponies of Equestria!
JK. Awesome story keep it up. The action was very well written. My only complaint is, I don't see Rarity lifting that much weight.
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Indeed, thy villain in thy story is indeed batman XP
Thanks, and i do admit I may have hammed up Rarity's magical ability
nice chapter but can you say which ponys have what expressions because they vary a lot and i can tell who does it but its still nice just to read it and yes you did amp up rarity's ability alot
but as long as she doesn't become the new "Element of Magic" im fine by that
Main reason i had her throw as many trees as she did was because I knew that everyone was expecting only one tree to be thrown. But then it's like "OMG three trees oh crap!" lol