Celestia Steals The Moon

by megkit

2. Under The Castle

They ran down the halls of the bottom floor of the castle, eye-searching for a door leading to the basement of which had a door to the (12 foot tall) crawl space underneath the basement.

Celestia came to screeching halt directly in front of the door, grinning.

"Is this it, sister?" Luna asked as she walked upto her sister.

"Yes, lulu! Yes!" She used her magic to swing open the two large doors.

Luna ran in, using her horn for light as she ran down the spiraling flight of stairs

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500 stair-steps later...

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The two siblings arrived in the castle basement. It was bigger than some peoples homes, but to them, it was concidered a normal sized room.

Luna ran around the room, levitating objects and looking inside chests.

"The moon isn't here, Tia!"

"It appears it-" she stifled a snicker "-is not Lulu. We shall look atop thy castle!"

"No! We shall look in thy room!" She started up the overly-long flight of stairs.

"Alright..." Celestia's humor had dropped.

what if she finds it?

Author's Note:

What if?

Comments

[Dragonfist]

They ran down the halls of the bottom floor of the castle, eye-searching for a door leading to the basement of which had a door to the (12 foot tall) crawl space underneath the basement.

Eyes. Don't need brackets. You said there was a door twice. A crawl space wouldn't be twelve feet tall, it's called a crawl space for a reason.

"Is this it, sister?" Luna asked as she walked upto her sister.

Space between up and to.

"Yes, lulu! Yes!" She used her magic to swing open the two large doors.

Caps for names...

which had a door to the (12 foot tall) crawl space underneath the basement. "Yes, lulu! Yes!" She used her magic to swing open the two large doors.

Suddenly two doors?

It was bigger than some peoples homes, but to them, it was concidered a normal sized room.

Considered.

we shall look atop thy castle!"

Luna now owns the castle.

"No! We shall look in thy room!"

You used it right this time but other times wrong, how?

what if she finds it?

Caps for first word...