Rarity is always happy to patronize Sweet Apple Acres. She's also always happy to see Granny Smith. What does not make Rarity happy - is being given a rusty coin. And she will stop at nothing to get a better bit.
(Featured in 12/21/14 edition of Everfree Northwest Fanfic Spotlight)
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You've captured Granny Smith perfectly, and you captured Rarity's personality as well. I enjoyed it, although the ending was funny I felt a bit sad over it. All in all a fantastic story
She's not the only one.
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I enjoyed this story and thought you did a good job in capturing both Granny and Rarity's personalities down. I have no sympathy for Rarity in the end, she deserves more that at the end. This was worth the favourite and a like!
-Frost
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Thanks a bunch for the compliment. Yeah, the ending was definitely black comedy material which should really have its own tag, IMHO.
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While I knew exactly how I wanted to end this, I have to wonder how Rarity had the nerve to show her face around the farm so soon after the bad news. I guess it was one of those situations where it looked worse if she did nothing so she rolled the dice. And thank you for the compliment.
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Comedy is a process of finding the common bond you have with your audience. Some go with trips to the DMV. Others talk about plane flights. Me, I go with bodily fluids. Not exclusively, of course. When used properly, such as Granny using it as leverage over Rarity, I feel that it works.
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You, sir, deserve a kitten. Or, if you are allergic, you deserve to be de-allergicified. And then given a kitten.
Have you ever considered submitting this story to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.
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I haven't considered it, actually. If you think it meets their standards, would you be willing to submit it on my behalf? I'm terribly lazy when it comes to non-creative stuff.
This... This is a great little nugget of a story. Dark, for sure, but great.
Oh my goodness, this is sooooooo Rarity. So much.
After reading this story I want to kick Rarity myself.
Great story telling.
I have worked retail and feel Granny Smith's pain.
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Thanks so much for the compliments. I sincerely appreciate them.
I enjoyed your story. Make more short stories. I love you angelbunny!!
I loved the story, but the dark ending ruined it for me. Did not fit the rest of the story at all.
This one didn't even seem dark in the slightest! Hahahahaha