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Today is discord birthday today and screwball gives him a gift to him a gift he will never forget.

Big thanks to Discorded SheepcityUSA for helping me with the story and idea.

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PFFFT HAHAHAAHA! :rainbowlaugh:

I knew what was gonna happen, and I'm still laughing. :rainbowlaugh:

Whoa...Screwball knows what Daddy likes, lol.

I laughed at that. That was hilarious!

This is perfect!

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: OMG THAT WAS PERFECT!

right now Discord is probably thinking 'thank you Screwball' oh god this was great and there's more to come? :yay::yay:

and now the cover art makes so much sense:rainbowwild::raritywink:

Saw it coming about half a mile away. But not the exact shape of it. Man I kinda want to see Flutters in that outfit, as much as it sounds like an iteration of playboy bunny, it sounds adorable.

I kinda find Screwball unlikable though, a little too much on the abrasive side. And before any protests are made, I have never read anything with Screwball before so I don't know whether that is the "established" character or not. I, kinda, don't like Screwball. But I liked the punchline here, so well done.

5362509 Screwy doesn't have an established character, seeing as she's a background pony with only a theory of being Discord's daughter to support her and not much of a fan-established personality like other background ponies seem to have . Some people make her dramatic and sad, some people make her shy. I helped with writing Screwball in this story sooooo...Okay, I have a lot of Screwball stories, and in pretty much all of them she acts like this or something similar to this (heck, in two of them I went as far as making her the main villain.) Basically I portray her as a sort of Pony-Discord. Played up mostly for humor, and a really big troll. If the story is comedy and has Screwball in it, you'd kinda know what to expect.

It's really a matter of preference of which characterization you prefer more I guess.

Damn, Screwball! Shipping like UPS.

lol. :rainbowlaugh:

I can't wait to see the fallout from this.

nice one screwball you unintentionally pranked discord the mighty god of chaos in to a blank minded god

I think I've seen fanart of that at some point. Fluttershy dressed like that, I mean.

So...is this a one-shot? It reads like it, but the story still says incomplete.

Oh..my...gosh...
BWAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!
That is the most adorable and funny thing ever!!!:rainbowlaugh:

I hope you can continue this because i want to know what happens afterwards, this is just so cute and hilarious on Discord's reaction. What is he gonna do?? Keep going!!

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