Spell testing temporarily causes Twilight to lose the ability to even. She must figure out how to be able to again.
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Nyperold
Just some guy who's seen 6 seasons and the movies and read up on the rest. Favorite character is Twi, favorite CMC is either Apple Bloom or Sweetie Belle, and favorite background pony is Diamond Mint.
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Wuh?
It ended to soon!
Great idea but you passed the opportunity to make something truly hilarious! All you needed to do was make the scene longer!
5279906 I agree could have extended the even part just a little longer with confusion and mayhem running rampant.
Lol. Cute story!
Needs 20% more hijinks.
Teh lolz
lel i can't even
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Why
Amusing turn of phrase. Kind of boring over-all though.
In the sequel, she should lose her ability to can and then, in the final part of the trilogy, she accidentaly.
...I'm afraid I don't quite understand... Captain?
Hmm, sounds like me when I'm reading a story with a "random" tag.
Ooooh. Math. Ooooh!
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Urban Dictionary link.
My usage in this story is not quite that; here, the spell keeps her from making even rows of books, as well as from making rows of even numbers of books.
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I think I would inflict the "can't can" spell on the Apples, since they seem to be the ones who would can in the first place. I haven't seen anything suggesting that Twilight does.
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Sorry, I can't currently think of how to do that.
I will let you in on something: my original imagining had Rainbow do something else, but when it actually came down to writing it, I felt it made more sense this way. If I can figure out where to go from the immediate result of that, and write it to my satisfaction, maybe I'll post it as a bonus. A split in the timeline, if you will.
What is this I don't even....
Okay, I'm gonna read it now.
Edit: I don't get it...
I don't even...
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That was nice. Short, but nice.
5288005 Oh.... she can't EVEN!!!! Now i get it!
I like that it was odd that she couldn't even.
I literally cannot even
That... wasn't what I expected.
That spell... For some reason, when I saw it, I thought of Bill Cipher...
Then... "Esrever"... For some reason... Wait, of course!
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Sounds like the best sequel in the history.