Fluttershy feels like she's being left behind when all of her friends find special someponies except her. In a fit of embarrassment, she hires an anonymous escort. But then that escort turns out to be someone surprising.
But Steel! It could totally be some OTHER white unicorn mare with a purple mane and blue eyes whose cutie mark/name/talent is in some way related to gems who enjoys giving of herself freely.
Ooooh, I wonder who it is! Hmmm, it's obviously someone that Fluttershy's met before. Wait! I've got it! It's Blueblood! I mean, it is entirely plausible that he got turned into a mare by Celestia because she got annoyed at him. He's already white, he has blue eyes, and I bet he died his hair purple so that no-one would recognise him! It's perfect!
5975404 I would think you'd have that problem upon reading the description. It's not like this wasn't telegraphed. Or maybe it was too obvious and you assumed it was a fake-out?
Well, next chapter is gonna be interesting, to say the least. I wonder on there reactions when they see eachother. I can honestly believe FS not connecting the dots due to her innocent nature, and well, if she has Rarity on any kind of a pedestal, which I think she does, then thinking of her as some 'escort' is just not something she would ever believe possible. I do wonder how far that pedestal is gonna drop after this.
I also have to wonder what Rarity will know about this meet up, especially if she is so insistent on knowing alot about her clients first. Will Velvet be less than discreet on telling her? Or will she be able to skirt by with saying 'Trust me, this one meets every one of your requirements in spades." Also makes me wonder on her two other clients, and if they were mares at all. So much curiousity, so little I will probably ever find out due to this not likely going to Rarity's viewpoint at all. Ah well, I shall enjoy it nonetheless.
Hm. Fluttershy might be easily accused of being dense here, as it perfectly matches Rarity and she's "Sapphire". Part of me is like COME ONNNNNnnnn but at the same time... Purple mane and white coat are probably not THAT uncommon and like in our world blue is probably a common eye color. Also Flutters isn't exactly in her normal frame of mind right now. She's obviously way out of her depth and I don't think it's really hit her yet. But it will
Velvet is, like, totally amazing, like I really love her mane and by that I mean her mannerisms
You've got one "Finest Escorts" mixed in with all of the "Finest Companions".
Velvet is just so adorably awkward. It's like she knows the definition of "professional" but doesn't know how to apply that definition to herself.
let’s just say I’ve taste-tested a few of our recipes
This made me snerk, and almost bite my tongue. Never change Velvet, never change.
Also that whole scene where Velvet though Fluttershy knew who "Sapphire" was and then out she didn't. I think I'm just going to really enjoy any scene that Velvet plays a major part in.
Sapphire never charges.
Oh how very generous of her. That sort of thing is quite a rarity these days.
Velvet laughed. “Heh, sorry, I shouldn’t laugh. You just act really cute when you’re nervous, but there’s not any need to be. But I tell that to everypony their first time, and they always act nervous anyway. So go ahead, I guess, but while you’re wiggling around in your chair, do you have any questions, or would you like to get started now?”
I have a question. Why am I sitting in a chair? I'm a horse! Oh right, this story was probably adapted to MLP from a non-MLP source. That's how a lot of these popular clopfics work.
Velvet must have noticed something in her face, as she quickly added, “Not that you should care! There are a million different reasons why a pony would prefer to meet someone through us. Convenience, for one. Personally, I think ponies should be free to do whatever makes them happy.
Except be single. Ever. Yeah, yeah, I'll stop. Sorry.
“Um, the White Hill,” Fluttershy said. The White Hill Hotel was Ponyville’s only hotel. Fluttershy would have preferred if no other ponies saw Sapphire coming to her cottage, especially another white unicorn with a purple mane and blue eyes she knew. She didn’t know how she could explain this to her.
7001154 you demand logic an sense from talking, magical, sometimes flying pastel colored, sometimes flying mini-horses. Who's to say, that they don't have a different skeletal structure than you average, earth and creepy looking pony?
yep, that's what I expected.
But Steel! It could totally be some OTHER white unicorn mare with a purple mane and blue eyes whose cutie mark/name/talent is in some way related to gems who enjoys giving of herself freely.
It could happen! Really!
Ooooh, I wonder who it is! Hmmm, it's obviously someone that Fluttershy's met before. Wait! I've got it! It's Blueblood! I mean, it is entirely plausible that he got turned into a mare by Celestia because she got annoyed at him. He's already white, he has blue eyes, and I bet he died his hair purple so that no-one would recognise him! It's perfect!
5974942 Yeah! For instance, it could be Rarity's long lost twin sister!
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Aaagh! How did you know?!
5975304 pinkie.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw8619-oie_2894267nYfI9sI_1.gif
Oof. Right in the suspension of disbelief.
5975404 I would think you'd have that problem upon reading the description. It's not like this wasn't telegraphed. Or maybe it was too obvious and you assumed it was a fake-out?
5975547
I'm referring to fluttershy's cluelessness, not the reveal itself (and I'm mostly just being silly)
5976689 She is remarkably, adorably, clueless, yes.
Unicorn... white... purple mane... blue eyes... enjoys giving back to others... never charges... and is incredibly picky...
Nope! No idea who that is!
Well, next chapter is gonna be interesting, to say the least. I wonder on there reactions when they see eachother. I can honestly believe FS not connecting the dots due to her innocent nature, and well, if she has Rarity on any kind of a pedestal, which I think she does, then thinking of her as some 'escort' is just not something she would ever believe possible. I do wonder how far that pedestal is gonna drop after this.
I also have to wonder what Rarity will know about this meet up, especially if she is so insistent on knowing alot about her clients first. Will Velvet be less than discreet on telling her? Or will she be able to skirt by with saying 'Trust me, this one meets every one of your requirements in spades." Also makes me wonder on her two other clients, and if they were mares at all. So much curiousity, so little I will probably ever find out due to this not likely going to Rarity's viewpoint at all. Ah well, I shall enjoy it nonetheless.
HA!
HA!
BWA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!
Next chapter, now, please.
5976732 Indeed, she is
5975304 You. You're doing another amazing job. I bow to you and I'll wait here quietly for the next chapter.
Wow, I did not see that coming!
So Fluttershy's going on a date with "Sapphire". I hope it goes okay.
Hm. Fluttershy might be easily accused of being dense here, as it perfectly matches Rarity and she's "Sapphire". Part of me is like COME ONNNNNnnnn but at the same time... Purple mane and white coat are probably not THAT uncommon and like in our world blue is probably a common eye color. Also Flutters isn't exactly in her normal frame of mind right now. She's obviously way out of her depth and I don't think it's really hit her yet. But it will
Velvet is, like, totally amazing, like I really love her mane and by that I mean her mannerisms
You've got one "Finest Escorts" mixed in with all of the "Finest Companions".
Velvet is just so adorably awkward. It's like she knows the definition of "professional" but doesn't know how to apply that definition to herself.
This made me snerk, and almost bite my tongue. Never change Velvet, never change.
Also that whole scene where Velvet though Fluttershy knew who "Sapphire" was and then out she didn't. I think I'm just going to really enjoy any scene that Velvet plays a major part in.
Oh how very generous of her. That sort of thing is quite a rarity these days.
I have a question. Why am I sitting in a chair? I'm a horse! Oh right, this story was probably adapted to MLP from a non-MLP source. That's how a lot of these popular clopfics work.
Except be single. Ever. Yeah, yeah, I'll stop. Sorry.
7001154 you demand logic an sense from talking, magical, sometimes flying pastel colored, sometimes flying mini-horses.
Who's to say, that they don't have a different skeletal structure than you average, earth and creepy looking pony?
7001154
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Did...did we watch a different MLP or something? They have chairs in the show dude