This story is a sequel to Twilight's Shadow
Twilight Sparkle, the princess of friendship is dead. In her place, Twilight Shade, the queen of darkness has risen. She has had a lot of time to plan out her next move. And she has her sights set on Equestria. One pony at a time.
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YAY! SEQUAL!
hmmm wile i agree Luna is a great ally..i feel her corruption was a little..to easy? i dont know thats just me ill keep reading regardless i do love a evil twi story
YAY! SQUEAKEL!!!!!!!!!!!!111
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i agree
plz make celestia's (if you include her) Transformation harder.
their princesses for peat sake
Like everyone else....perhaps a little too easy. Also , twilight looks like a bad oc. The best of villains keep their style simple yet classy.
atleast that was harder than luna
what about the main 6 though
and the elements
I like dark stuff
*claps hooves together*
Bravo! Bravo! That was one good show you gave us... though I do wonder... is Discord next on the corruption list?
5400832 I don't think I'll include him.
Oh well, at least its good.
Heck he would have made things interesting.
this seems too easy, also, the logic part of the brain doesn't shut down, just the part that questions reality, if anything, her ideals would be more ... pure, because she wouldn't have the part of her that recognizes the necessity for a lesser evil, the part that realizes that the greater good, requires the lesser evil, in short, she would be with her ideals, and fighting evermore harder because of that.
which brings me to the beginning phrase, the capture, nay, enslavement of someones mind is a whole lot harder than just asking and waving magic around, it is a delicate art, each easel truly unique in it's shape and color, and sometimes, if you're lucky, you might get two that turn out similar.
-sorry, it's 2:30 AM this was a good story
Talk about easy subjection. Celestia, dreaming or not, is far stronger than that. Plus, their corrupted forms are a little over the top, and that's not a compliment. I would have been fine with Luna changing into her Nightmare Moon form with slightly darker features.
I...can't say I like this. It seems a bit rushed.
I feel like you're making them a little too easy to submit not to mention Celestia just arrived and started fighting. i mean you could have had her say.
"how could you do this Luna?! Don't you remember the the dangers of the nightmare!?"
At least near the end Celestia I began fighting back so it shows she didn't fully submit. and such a shame it's over so soon I was actually curious what would happen to Spike. How he was going to react to this offer as well and if he and Rarity would end up together as A couple and fellow darklords alongside Twilight and her teachers.
please finish this
It feels rushed, but I would love to see this continued.