Any Suggestions · 5:03am Apr 23rd, 2015
I have no idea what I want to do for the sequel to Dark Fire. So any ideas?
I have no idea what I want to do for the sequel to Dark Fire. So any ideas?
I am rewriting my story "Grip of Nature" and currently the first half is done. I am terrible at editing so if anyone wants to take a look that would be great. Here's the link. Tell me anything you think I need to fix. (Spoilers if you haven't read the first chapter)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dvyLRXY8VcqSUOxbxneAv2WQ30SNjJq44dofxe1_aMM/edit?usp=sharing
I'm going to rewrite the entire story. It will be mostly the same with a few key differences. The reason I am doing this is because I more or less wrote my self into a corner and this is the only way to fix it.
I am going to go on haitus for the rest of the month. I have alot to do so I'm going to need some time away from writing.
So from now on I will be updating Kingdom of Monsters every Wednesday and Grip of Nature at least every Sunday if not more. When Kingdom of Monsters is finished I will replace it with a different one (I have alot of ideas)
Sup, if you have any idea for a monster that I did not add already please leave it in the comments. Thank you. If you do so, you will get to pick the name of each character who becomes said monster.
Here are all of the titles of the Kingdom of Monsters.
Head Lamia: Queen, Master
Head Vampire: Mistress
Head Elemental: Chief
Head Lycan: Alpha
Head Archne: Duchess
Head Dragon: Prince
Head Wraith: Lady
Secondary Lamia: Master
Secondary Vampire: Miss
Secondary Elemental: Commander
Secondary Lycan: Beta
Secondary Archne: Noble
Secondary Dragon: 2nd Prince
Secondary Wraith: Madam
Common Lamia: Lamia
Common Vampire: Fledgling
Common Elemental: Captain
Common Lycan: Omega
This is a giude to all of the powers the monsters have in my story.
Limia: Can hypnotize, naturally control other monsters and can gain their abilities with a poison that only they can make
Vampire: Can drink blood to get stronger can lure ponies places, can fly and can use echolocation
Elemental: Has complete control of their element completely and make it out of nothing
Lycan: Is faster and stronger than any other monster. Any one a lycan bites becomes a lycan.