"It maybe just an apple, but it isn't an apple without its seeds."
Apple bloom is in a play and she is the lead mare. The play is almost about to begin. What will happen if they had to change it at the last minute?
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it's perform, and that sentence still wouldn't make any sense. I won't read a story if you can't be bothered to correct your description.
5603923 I am sorry. People/Ponies make mistakes. You don't have to be rube about it. Just because for one little spelling error doesn't mean you have to be mad out it. I am sorry, I am not trying to be angry at you, all I am saying is how I feel in a calm, friendly manner . I'll fix it and if you like you can read my story.
You know what...you're right. My choice of words was more abrasive than it needed to be. I was in a bad mood and left a bunch of criticisms yesterday, that were valid, but also not phrased very nicely.
Here's what I was trying to say.
There are thousands of stories on this site, the intro box is your first chance to get a reader to read your story as opposed to any one of ten thousand others. If I see such a glaring typo in the box, which is super short and therefore easy to edit, it makes me believe that the rest of the story is probably riddled with typos and therefore I won't enjoy it.
5607443 When you put it that way, I understand what you are saying.
Hey even when I get mad I just say what I say without thinking about the consequences in the end. It's a part of life every people/ponies go through.
Another thing are you going to read my story? As you see on the page it shows my editor and it was there yesterday. If did or going to read it I want to know what you think of it.