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Wilting Sun

Queen Celestia has long since been the protector of her little ponies. Sol Invictus they call her during war time. Beloved Mother when peace is in abundance. Celestia has even heard some call her the Goddess of Life itself. She has never been called sister before.

AU where Luna does not exist.
Cover art credit goes to maocha on Deviant Art.

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Noodle the Cuttlepony

Noodle the Cuttlepony #1 · Nov 29th, 2014 · 1 · ·

Don't know if anyone really reads the authors note considering there is a dislike and no comment from said disliker. Please if you dislike it, tell me why.

Gizmopower

Gizmopower #2 · Nov 29th, 2014 · 5 · ·

i did not dislike this fic, i thoroughly enjoyed it in fact. however, you should maybe improve your vocabulary. make it more diverse and impresionable. tis only a nit pick on my part, but i promise it will improve your writing immensly

Noodle the Cuttlepony

Noodle the Cuttlepony #3 · Nov 29th, 2014 · 2 · ·

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Thank you for the feedback. I have been trying to diversify my vocabulary, but it's so easy to just stick to the words you know. I'll be more aware of such things in my next story.