The dazzlings: Adagio Dazzle, Sonata Dusk, and Aria Blaze have been defeated in the battle of bands. They are broken and with no mode of sustaining themselves until Adagio sees Sunset's magic book....
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Hmm, I'm interested. Please continue.
5221699 thanks so much for commenting. I will be working on this fic today!
What... is this supposed to be longer?
5223873 Yup! Wait till you see the end!
5223894
Good! I was about to scream, like Wilhelm scream..
5223897
Well I'm glad you like it! Still working on this chapter though.
5223906
You should probably take it down then, because it's published....
Umm, I think this should be... longer. And only published once it's done.
5223953 5223927 Ya I'm sorry about that. I am new here so i forgot that other chapters dont need to be approved. I will not forget next time!
5223953 It's longer now XD
5224042 Albeit slightly.
5224081
The next one is my final chapter, it will be much longer don't worry
5224123
Final chapter? Are you CRAZY!?
This is definitely too good to just squeeze in three chapters, even if you intend it to be much longer.
This fanfic has potential to be GREAT AND POWERFUL!!!
5228568 ok ok you win
I'll add in more 
5228568 Rather have a few short and good chapters than one huge quick one right?
5228641
I am very pleased to read this.
Trust me, you can turn it into an epic story. Just give it a shot. 
Oh, and I also want to compliment you for your interpretation of the relationship between the Dazzlings.
The usual fanfics with them describe Aria and Adagio to be very mean towards Sonata, hitting her (ok, Adagio slapped her in yours too, but that's not the point) or even chasing her away after their defeat.
I think if three sirens, girls or whatever have been together for millenia, then they ought to have developed a very deep bond. Also, I was very pleased that Aria stood up to Adagio in order to protect poor Sonata.
I don't think that Aria is that mean, at least not to Sonata.
5228659
Just do what you think is right.
Just don't make the story too short. As I said, it has very much potential and it would be a shame to let it go to waste. It is very refreshing to see true friendship between those three.
Especially when Adagio also protected Sonata from those two morons Snips and Snails.
I would have laughed so hard if she kicked their asses.
5228703 thanks so much!
I also think that since the three have been together for so long they should at least have some kind of friendship. I also remembered that Sonata liked snips and snail's rap so that's why she said that. 
...
Sonata X Tacos...
You need an editor and a prereader. Also, continuity note: Twilight didn't go back the same night as the Battle of the Bands, she went back the next day.
5235883 Thanks for pointing that out, I read my chapters a lot and I know I make some mistakes.
I hope you like it though 
Uhm... $10k rent a DAY? Where are they living, in a palace or something?
5240429 LOL
I have one word: FILTHY RICH
5240429 the pony
5240433
But wouldn't it make more sense for them to move into a much cheaper place? I mean, you can never know if something goes wrong and I doubt it would them do much good ending up homeless with no money.
Then they would be screwed. Honestly, I expect Adagio to think of that possibility. She is smart, after all.
5240454 Ok, I was actually thinking of writing about them moving to Landlord Cherry Jubilee's apartment building in the next chapter while they execute their plan.
5240454 I used to think that Filthy Rich just increased their rent after the whole hypnotizing him fiasco into letting them stay for free.
Wow, I didn't know friggin' huge books could fit into hoodie pockets.
5241146 Lol biggest hoodie pocket in ze world!
Alright, I'm interested.
This is one of my videos lol
Make more! this is like SO good!
HOW DARE YOU BEAT UP SONATA, YOU BASTARDS?!?! I'LL KILL YOU! YOU'LL ALL DIE! YOU'LL GET THE GAS!
Trixie's line was way funnier to me than I think it was supposed to be.
Anyway, great work, and can't wait for the next chapter.
I hope the Dazzlings exact their vengeance.
5248604 Thank you. Try saying it 3 times fast!
Troll chapter or dream chapter?
5249992 Lol none of the above
5250105 Well, that was anti-climactic as hell
5250155 Lol just kidding it was a dream chapter
5250155 It will be longer don't worry
Good thing this isn't legitimately the end, that would've been. . . disappointing, to say the least.
Jesus, you scared me with that ending.
5281652 Sorry, I am just new at this an didn't know how to end it as well as it should have.
The story overall was good, but to be honest the ending is not exactly spectacular.
I'll leave the like on it, since this is your first story, but just know that was not what you'll want your stories to end like in the future.
Please tell me you're gonna do a sequel to this story.
You make a good point. In most stories, the Sirens are broke. However, they've been in the human world for over a millennium, very easy for them to gain tons of money!
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OMG! Captain Planet!
I ship him with Adagio!
OH. MY. GOD. IS SHE FREAKING FOR REAL?!?