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Can the cyan colored Pegasus push her body through the pain she has never felt before, to prevent what had destroyed Ponyville in the near distant future? How would this even be accomplished, and how could she warn the past version of herself without Twilight's magic? Is this the end? Has Eqestria fallen into nothingness. Is there any Hope?

I would like to thank Eqestriadaily.com for awesome pics.

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I am new and dont exaclty now how to set it up but i posted it as a short story. think i should continue it?

Hmmmm... I'll read this later, when I have time. But one thing that annoys me in the description: without twilights magic Two things: Twilight should be capital, as it is a name, and Twilights should be Twilight's, possessive.

Sorry, late night typing, I will change it asap. Right now busy.

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