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Black_Cloud


This account is for all the cloppy goodness I can think of. For non-cloppy stories, visit my alternate account White_Cloud.

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...Well, that seems to be getting a smidge rapey towards the end! Have to see how it develops from here!

Fluttershy wants to be rutted by him again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again......

5190710 But of course :D Also, next chapter will make an appearance on either Saturday or sunday, because I get bored at work and want something to do.

This is where Fluttershy's lusty side kicks in,

5214838 Don't you know that it's always the quiet ones?

Comment posted by LegionofPony deleted May 25th, 2018

Hope my previous comment didn't make me sound like a pompous asshole. I'm just trying to give some constructive criticism for what I know could be a great story with a little editing. :twilightsmile:

But yeah, I really do like the story. I shall watch you for future updates.

Are the characters anthro? The way you describe them leans to it but you haven't tagged it anthro.

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I toyed with the idea of them being anthro, but in the end I decided to keep them as ponies.

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I'm very glad you kept them as ponies ^^

A little bit too lacking in detail for me, like why there isn't any serious mention of their being siblings, and the sex is a little too simplistic to be interesting. Still a great idea though!

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