After several months at the Wonderbolts academy, Rainbow finally gets the greatest surprise of her life! But, Rainbow isn't sure if she wants to accept or not.
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CassyDashie
I'm a young writer (elementary school) who enjoys singing, and writing mlp fanfics. I enjoy comedy and romance fics the most, and I mostly only read and write fics about Rainbow Dash.
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Good read.
What*
You can put stuff like this on the same line, makes it easier and less confusing to read.
Confident*
Didn't find any others worth mensioning.
10/10 on story, good concept, good view on characters.
7/10 on writing, few words didn't need a few punctuations they had, a lot of double spacing, but it may be me, i'm not sure, good job overall.
5282965 Thank you very much for this review.
I can't believe I mispelled confident. 
5284170 We all make mistakes, nothing big to worry about, that's why we love and tolerate. Also, your profile picture is absolutly adorable.
5284723 Thank you
I love it....