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A short poem on friendship and memories. A pony goes through a town with intentions she said she would not avert from for anything. Experiencing the lessons given to her through this journey makes her conclude that she just might need to ameliorate her intentions.

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Fort Impression

Fort Impression #1 · Oct 20th, 2014 · · ·

Good job, Annie, on the poem. It is really nice and full of various poetic styles. I am sure Zecora would very much approve of your work.

Also, you took care of the errors in your poem that I pointed out, and changed a couple things. Of course, I am not all that good of a poem writer, so I am not sure it is actually good or not; however, to me, it was really nice.

Also, I noticed from your game, you were attempting to be me, which was after our talk and your talk to get me back to FimFic. I am grateful for that, but try not to confuse my friends because then it throws me in a loop of being untrustworthy. I know you only meant good intentions though, but be careful next time you try that because they don't always turn out to be good.

From hell, to you, and back again,
Soto Konoha, U.S. Navy Hospital Corpsman

Phony15

Phony15 #2 · Oct 20th, 2014 · · ·

Really nice poem! I give it 5 mustaches out of 5

Csquared08

Csquared08 #3 · Oct 23rd, 2014 · · ·

That was... actually kind of neat.

But, like, you are obviously trying to be Soto.

Pandy Annie

Pandy Annie #4 · Oct 30th, 2014 · · ·

5174771 yup and I'm sorry like really really sorry for being someone I'm not. Like really sorry. And sorry for the late reply my school and dad are like... Well... They are school and dad! And so yeah. Sorry for deceiving you and making you think I was someone else.