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Glitter Grenade
Writing GLORIOUS trash. Nothing more or less.
Glitter Grenade
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Congratulations !!! You made smut out of my greatest fear! Imma go take a hot shower and get a stiff drink.
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Imma go drink somerubbin alchahol
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Wait, you think this is smut?
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Thank you! This is actually my first time writing a clopfic/fetish/kink fic! I really had a hard time because I had to have the foot kink be the main point of the story for this contest that I entered. Wow, you think that this is smut? You charmer you.
I haven't been around here too long but I'm pretty sure that the white line above your comment is the second chapter. That means you read the story to the second chapter. With the description being pretty much accurate... I'm going to guess you wanted to read the clopfic?
Way to face your fears!
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But rubbing alcohol wouldn't have the kick. I like drinking brain bleach and kickass in a can myself when I read something out there.
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This sigh of yours confuses me. I feel that you are upset but not exactly forthcoming with the goods. How on earth can I help if you've only made a sound effect at me? There's something else you want to say, I feel it.
5154956 probably just a side effect of that whoopass in a can
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I don't think that's the case. The sigh would have been a 'Fuck No' in large, bold letters.
I have a question! No offense, but I found it hard to tell whether there was actual gore or not. There isn't really any direct mention of it, only side comments that could maybe be interpreted as gore. In-fact, the only line that really screams "gore" is this one:
"Who knows how many liters of blood he could be losing thanks to her lack of action!"
But I am not sure if this is a metaphor or him over-reacting or if he really is actually bleeding. For know it will reside in the RAYR folder of the group, but please let me know the intended meaning of the line and whether there really is gore or not.
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It was him over-reacting. There's no gore. He stepped on the wood wrake and went a little crazy because of the pain.
Ooh, I'm glad you read it! What did you think? With all these downvotes, I'm feeling a little nervous.
5155740 Honestly, it is more than likely because of the way it happened. Having something burrow into your leg isn't the most common turn-on :P But I really think that is the only reason.
I have been writing forever and I can tell you that, while the writing wasn't the best, it was good and shows two MAJOR things.
1: You know what you are doing
2: You have massive potential.
This is not badly written and it is very creative, HOWEVER, I think because of the very unique way the fetish happens, a lot of people probably didn't like it. It may not be my favorite, but i thought it was unique and it was still pretty hot
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Thanks for all the praise and advice! This is my first clopfic and I was wondering if I did something wrong with the reaction.
I was thinking maybe I had Caramel think too much, maybe there wasn't enough sex, maybe I should have switched perspectives, maybe I should went with only one chapter... I had so many maybes floating in my head that I was thinking of making a blog or thread to ask around.
I guess I went a little too out there. But on the bright side, I got five followers out of it.
Domiliation
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Oh absolutely! This is smut for sure! Maybe not heavy, but most assuredly smut! And as for facing my fear... Well, we all have to someday right?
For a first attempt I gotta say, I'm impressed. Most people first tries are horrifying but this one was not bad at all.
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Same scenario, different characters and reactions. Also, Caramel is two-faced, hahaha.