It's about making the audience want more, not less.
Stupidity, along with fear, controls us.. makes us do things we frankly regret.
Working at an asylum, watching over the many ponies here alone? Oh yeah, can't get any dumber than that. Every little creak or thump is just a reminder of where I'm at.
This one made it to the popular list guys! (Added October 14, 2014) Thank you all!!!
Thank you to ShadowAcurus for editing as I dish this story out.
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This is like a MLP version of 5 Nights at Freddy's except in an Asylum this story is just gonna be so BAWSS!!!!!!!!!!
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Let it begin darling, momma's going to stay and see how far you will go with this.
I hope this goes well. Especially for my sake. I don't know what it'll bring, but...
Let's begin..
Sounds interesting. Il keep an eye on it.
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What is it? Something I did wrong? Gah!! This has me worried now.
5173328 Do not worry, darling. Just thinking quite calmly here. Glad I gave you something to worry about, that means you're ready to fix whatever error you made.
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Oh. Then I'm okay. whew
dafuq?
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*waves arms about for no reason*
All will be revealed. In time.
OMFG SO FUCKING EPIC THAT WAS JUST YES LIKE OMFG YES THANK YOU cR Gamer_Luna!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BEST BIRTHDAY PRESENT EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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You're welcome.
Some crazy sh*t going on but its cool in my opinion I think the reality where he has to fight to survive in the asylum is the real reality hes living and the one where he woke up on his date is the fake reality. Its cool yet creepy A.F. but still good 25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m2scr1ZnUU1r505tjo1_1280.jpg HOPE YOU LIKE MY PICTURE MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hey Ink Scape i posted a blog for you about this story you should come read it some time
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I aw the blog post, and may I say, those pictures really got me thinking about later chapters in the story... However, time can only tell
6132704 lol awesome and nice but if you do use my vinyl scratch idea put her in there for getting in a musical war with octavia and having vinyl kill octavia with her bass cannon lol but it would be cool to read that keep up the good work i look forward to reading the new additions to the story i plan on keeping a close eye on this
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Well, I have begun... another horror/thriller/mystery themed fan fiction. However, I do not have much progress on the first chapter, but never mind that! That little secret is for later.
6134055 ok ill keep it secret
Hello. After (finally) getting around to looking your story over for the Goodfic Bin, I unfortunately have elected to remove your story from the folders. Details can be found here.
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I fully understand the reasons as to why the story was removed. I also must apologize for the...lack of character development and cliche portrayal of the Mane 6 (and other characters portrayed). I feel as if I must inform you that this was written two years ago by a 14-year-old who had no idea what they were doing.
In other news, though, I have stated in a recent blog post that this story will be rewritten before the end of the year (if that helps any). But thank you for the insight, it's appreciated.
- SC
7620389 No problem. If, when it gets rewritten and you want to give it another go, feel free to re-submit! I'd be glad to give it another look if you want.
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Thanks. I'll try not to disappoint too much this time.
- SC
7620417 Considering other 'horror' stories I've seen, yours was actually far from a disappointment. Just a bit choppy.
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I fully understand where you're coming from too. Looking at it now, I can't believe that it was highly liked with no downvotes...which is a major reason as to why I've decided to rewrite it.
But thanks.
- SC