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Traveling_Coyote
Writer of stories involving ponies and humans. Sometimes no humans, but always pony.
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Very nice I love the set up to it. Can't wait to see more chapters.
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I don't want to disappoint you, but this is a one-shot. Nice subtle hint, though.
Hopefully you enjoy it.
Rarity is a weird drunk...
Not bad, long build up, but it worked! Thumbs up!
This story was just WAT
That is some fine Rarijack
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Thanks! I see them as sailing the friend-ship, but sometimes a pony's mind wanders into uncharted seas.
Rarity wat r u doin
We...need...a...sequel!!!
I loved the set up and the whole spa scene was very enjoyable. It had a good pace and the dialogue felt in-character.
Rarity's drunken sex fantasy was well written and worked very well, but together with the fact that Applejack left rather quickly after breakfast made me, as the huge Rarijack shipper I am, a bit sad. Poor Rarity...
Well, anyway I will fav this because it's good and well written, good work, darling.
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Thanks for the review and your kind words. I wanted to portray some sense of melancholy in Rarity's life. She's ambitious both personally and professionally, but it seems to be taking some time for her to get what she thinks she wants.
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No problem, darling. It was my pleasure.
Oh, and you really did that very well, I was so hoping that Applejack would come down and stumble upon Rarity in the middle of her, um... Roleplay, just to see if Rarity could confront Applejack and admit her true feelings but sadly it never happened.
As I said, I'm a huge sucker for Rarijack romance and despite they never got together here I loved the story for just how well-written it was and the emotions I felt reading it. Once again, great job.