"Mr. Bunny? Would you please come cuddle with me..."
Silence.
"... Thank you Mr. Bunny, I really needed that hug..."
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That was......wow. Just wow.
Those 5 minutes it took for me to read your story? They were not wasted. That was very good.
Deep man, great story
This is very well-written, and spins a really sad tale in a really nice way. I am confused by one thing, however:
The only one who cared for my company was Mr. Bunny. Mr.Bunny and his-
His...what? I can't say I follow.
Wow... you sir or madam, deserve five mustaches.
Poor Raindrops.
It's amazing the bond you can form with a background character in a little over a thousand words.
Who all is distrubed by the picture?
I'm confused... what's going on in this?
sigh... Raindrops can come live with Lightning, he likes helping the ponyfolk.
I'll reserve judgement on this till I see where if anywhere you're going with it.
Wow. Tracking.
So... look on here and what do i find? 45 NOTIFICATIONS! OH YEAH! THANK YOU EVERYONE!
Now, to catch up on comments...
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Thank you muchles~ Honestly, it was a concept I came up with in work and i try to develop new styles to writing than the usual kind. Thankfully, this paid off well
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Thanks much
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Oh, that part... it was meant to go right into the next "Silence." sentence, a small skill i learned from Lewis Carroll
It was a transition thingy i wanted to try... So you would read the sentence as "The only one who cared for my company was Mr. Bunny. Mr.Bunny and his- Silence."
Hope that clarified things a bit~
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And YOU, sir or madam, deserves a few yays~
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Like i said in the fic, i love Raindrops so much and was actually surprised Raindrops was NOT on the list for character selections for the stories... broke my heart...
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Everyone is... But good images attracts people, yes?
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well, basically this would be an opening chapter. Something i wanted to try, basically using the least amount of action as possible. Its sort of supposed to be like a flashback, but you get Raindrops philosophical viewing in the transition periods. Honestly it was a shot in the dark kind of story but i might be making a second part to it... who knows?
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Yes... track me please...
733734 well I'm tracking I'm eager to see if you continue this.
If this story continues, then sweet!
If not, well, it's a great one shot.
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I might, i might not... and for some reason, i keep replying with images~
738432 Are you kidding??!! Images say everything!!
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Poor Raindrop, i hope she finds happiness
That was such a strange and creative story... One of the most unique fanfics I've ever read, good work!
Man, this gave me chills. I liked it for that.
Can't say I was blown away though. There is very little narrative or description and this makes it a little flat. It's like a mix between a poem and a story. I think, though, that's what makes it creepy and interesting.
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I was trying for something you wouldn't see everyday... it was meant sort of like you were trying to fill in the scenary with your mind a bit and such
holy fucking shit
that was amazing
Hey! didja notice? Raindrops got a character tag now so you can properly tag your story!
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Hello darkness, my old friend
I've come to talk with you again
Because a vision softly creeping
Left its seeds while I was sleeping
And the vision that was planted in my brain
Still remains
Within the sound of silence...