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ATTENTION: THERE IS NO GORE IN HERE!

Applejack is making breakfast for the Apple one morning and is surprised to suddenly have new neighbors! Nice surprise, huh? What's even worse, they took over part of their beloved orchard! Now Applejack not only has a grudge, she has some competition! Can she compete with her new-found rivals though? Something IS strange about all of them, but Applejack just can't place her hoof on it... Hopefully, time will tell for the mare! And will Ponyville survive a new family of rather eccentric and odd ponies? Who knows!

Let's just say that somepony is gonna get burned!

(Oh dear Celestia, such a terrible pun...)

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Comments ( 10 )
zel

Title, image and description made me think this was a gore fic.dl.dropbox.com/u/93510029/Fimfiction/spikeseemslegit.png

I don't want to want to read it, but I want to read it. I guess I'll put it on my RIL list.

Oranges are best fruit.
*all this said just by the cover*

I'm sure that if I tried to read every good ponyfic on this website, I would die before I would finish. But something made me click yours, and I like it. I'm curious as to why a Burnt Oranges character would want a bunch of apple trees, but that was like the bit before the intro of an episode--I'll just have to wait and see.
I can only pray you don't make the mistake of thinking Applejack has a personal animosity towards all other fruits, but if you made it this far, I assume you know what you're doing.
SO LET'S SEE HOW THIS GOES. :ajsmug:

I really like this! Can't wait to see where it goes!:ajsmug:

-raises eyebrow-

Ah vagueness, that good ol' plot device that keeps the reader guessing.

Nice ending!! Can't wait for more!

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