• Published 27th Oct 2014
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Leave All Your Worries Far Behind - 2006midnight



Celestia has a nightmare and turns to Luna for help on overcoming her newfound fears.

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Close Your Eyes

Two alicorn fillies, one blue and one white rolled together in the grass, laughing merrily all the while. The white filly rolled over on top of the smaller blue alicorn pinning her in place. Determined not to be beaten yet, the blue filly wriggled out from underneath her captor, got to her hooves, and raced away with a shout of, “Catch me if you can Tia!”

The larger white filly scrambled to her hooves and gave chase. Looking back over her shoulder at her pursuer, the smaller of the two fillies opened her wings and began flapping them madly. A few moments later she squealed in surprise and shouted, “Tia! Look! I’m flying!”

The white filly slowed down to a stop and moaned indignantly, “That’s not fair Lulu! How come you get to fly first? I’m the older sister, not you!”

Still bubbling with excitement, the blue filly landed messily next to her older sister. “Awwww, come on Tia,” she whined, “Why do you always have to spoil my fun?”

The older of the two fillies rolled her eyes and said, “I’m not spoiling anything. I just hate how you get to be the first to do everything. Just once, I wanted to be able to beat you at something, but you still managed to do that thing first as well.” The white filly turned her head away from her sister in an attempt to hide the tears that threatened to spill from her eyes.

Her little sister laughed, but her voice was no longer the voice of a filly. The voice that her older sister heard was the voice of a full grown mare, one that would haunt her many years later, for ten long centuries of her life. This was the voice of her worst nightmare. "Well, well, well, look who's jealous now. Not so perfect after all, are we Celestia. Why does everypony love you so much anyway? You were always the weaker sister. I was so much stronger, so much better than you at everything, and yet, look who was left to lead Equestria. What were ponies thinking when they chose you for that role?"

The laughter began again, but this time it was more malicious almost to the point of cackling. The white filly dropped to the ground, curled into a ball, and began to sob uncontrollably. All the while, her little sister stood over her, laughing and taunting her relentlessly.


Celestia shot bolt upright in her bed and screamed loudly. Her breathing was labored as tears began to fall in thick rivulets down her cheeks. The door to her chambers was thrown open by magic and in the doorway stood her younger sister Luna. "Sister, what's wrong? Are you being attacked?"

After taking a moment to get her breathing back under control, Celestia replied, "I'm only being attacked by inner demons sister. It was just a nightmare."

The princess of the night stepped further into her sister's bed chambers and shut the door behind her. Walking up to her sister's bed, Luna asked, "Would you like to talk about it? I might be able to help."

Gesturing for her little sister to join her on the bed, Celestia said, "If you wouldn't mind, I would appreciate that a lot."

"Of course I don't mind," Luna said as she sat down next to her older sister, "Why don't you start by explaining what the dream was about?"

Leaning close to her younger sister for comfort, the princess of the sun began tentatively, "I dreamed we were both fillies again and were playing together. I was chasing you when you flew for the first time. You were really excited about it, but I was jealous because you were always the first to do something even though I was the oldest. I tried to explain that to you, and your voice became the voice of Nightmare Moon. You then proceeded to taunt me and laugh at me in her voice while all I could do was cry."

Luna wrapped her wings around her older sister and hugged her tightly. "I promise I would never ever do that for real. A nightmare is all that was, alright? I know that it scared you; it would've scared me as well if I'd been in your position. You've had to deal with so much pain in your life sister, partly due to my stupidity, and you need a break. I can see how all of this is overwhelming you, and if you'll let me, I can give you a break from all of this."

Tears still glistening in her eyes, Celestia looked at her younger sister. "What would you do Luna? I'm not sure there's even a way for me to escape from all of this since it's been so long."

"You've always been the one who has done everything possible to keep both of our hopes up when times are difficult. I know it seems like you've had to deal with this for so long that it can't go away, but I promise you, I can give you one night of peaceful sleep. Trust me Tia. I'll take you back to those times when we were young and carefree, but with me, you won't have to fear the return of a nightmare. Let me help you sister, and I'll guard your dreams as if they were my own life."

Celestia looked up at her sister hopefully. "Would you really do that for me?"

"Of course I would. I love you Tia."

"If you're sure about this, then I'd really appreciate it," Celestia sighed and leaned back against her pillows.

Smiling down at her older sister, Luna got off of the bed and cast the spells necessary to ensure that Celestia would have nothing but pleasant dreams. As she watched her sister slip into sleep, Luna whispered, "I'll always be here for you Tia, no matter what. If you ever need me, I promise I'll do everything in my power to help you. You don't deserve all of this pain, and I'm sorry that I caused it to be placed on your shoulders in the first place."

A few tears began to form in Luna's eyes as she walked back to the door and opened it. Just as she slipped out of the room, the princess of the night looked back at her sleeping sister and said, "Sweet dreams Tia. I love you."

Comments ( 42 )

What a good sister... beautiful, as always.

I don't think the conversation between Luna and Celestia was well handled. Celestia's description of the nightmare was like an emotionless list of events, while Luna's reply can be summed up as "but I wouldn't do that", as though that affirmation was all that was needed to dispel the dream's intensity. Most nightmare's aren't rational, but acknowledging that doesn't reduce the impact at all. The internal conflict that was the cause of the nightmare isn't addressed at all--Celestia's feelings of inferiority and uselessness (speaking of which, the story doesn't match up to the description very well. Equestria is hardly mentioned at all, with the bulk of the story oriented around her feelings about Luna).

5191093 I see what you mean and I'm sorry that this story doesn't really work the way it should.

Good story, I like it. Hope to see more of your work my friend:twilightsmile:

5191714 Thank you, I have 17 more to write before the 31st so you'll have a lot of opportunities.:twilightblush:

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5191776
This does need a bit of work, but it's a good start! :twilightsmile: (Like most one-shots, I find; the few exceptions I've discovered hold prominent places in my Favorites list.)

5191995 Yeah, that's what happens when you're trying to write 19 stories in 5 days:twilightblush:

5192000

trying to write 19 stories in 5 days

:twilightoops: What madness is this? :pinkiegasp:
... :rainbowlaugh: Seriously, though, don't injure yourself or anything.

5192023 I'm way behind in One-shotober and I'm still going to try to finish. :twilightblush:

Lovely. :twilightsmile:

5192321

You're welcome. :pinkiesmile:

5191776 don't push yourself if you don't have to.

5192758 I said I was going to complete One-shotober so I do have to.

5192956 Don't force yourself. Because if you can't handle all those stories all month than take breaks.

5193117 I would've done it if I hadn't let all of the stupid shit going on in my life prevent me from writing. Writing is kind of an outlet for emotions anyway, so I'm going to do the best I can to get them all finished.

5193121

I don't mean to horn in on your conversation, but forcing yourself to write something just because you said you were going to is absolutely the worst motivator possible. No one's going to lynch you if you don't complete all thirty-one stories, and no one's going to be disappointed in you.

5193514 That's usually how I work though. And really, I hate myself enough right now, that I would be way more disappointed in myself than usual if I didn't finish them.

5193523

Don't be. Just take a step back and enjoy all that you've accomplished so far.

5193549 I can't not expect myself to finish them though. That's just how I've always been.

5193557

But you should only do it because you want to. :pinkiesad2:

5193579 Can't I want to not hate myself more than I do?:twilightsheepish:

5193582

You shouldn't hate yourself at all. :trixieshiftleft:

5193594

Then, stop. And start loving yourself. :scootangel:

5193607 But I can't. I don't know how.:fluttershbad:

5193613

There's a website for everything.

It's kind of a simplistic overview, but it's probably better than the dumb stuff I say. :twilightsheepish:

5193622 :rainbowderp: There really is a website for everything. And I'm sure you wouldn't say dumb things.

5193629

Not intentionally, no, but I have the vague, uneasy feeling that what I want to say and how it eventually translates into speech/words are two separate things. :rainbowlaugh:

5193640

But enough about me. Let's talk about me. :trollestia:

5193689

Joke. It's a quote from Johnny Bravo. :rainbowlaugh:

5193807

It was the 90's. Crazy times. :rainbowlaugh:

this is a nice look into Celestia's heart

I would say that it should be longer as it feels rushed. I'l love it if you turned it into something longer so that Celestia could delve deeper into her regrets/fears/etc

still giving it a thumbs up and fav

5194462 I was a little bit out of my element with this one, so I can see why you would say that. But thank you

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