One night, while one your way to get an ingredient for a potion, you were separated from Twilight and lost in the Everfree Forest. But when you found yourself , your world was changed forever with you met [i]
This had me going nuts with DBZ fever Best Chapter ever best read ever I loved it so much he even had his own version of a Super Saiyan and he did a Kamehameha wave.
Your italics are leaking.
6828438 thanks for that. And fixed
I feel like a watched a DBZ episode
The banter between Nito and Shade was great
6828954 that's what i was going for
There's a few attack references if you can pick'em out
6829644 I thank my co-writer Browneyedbagel for helping me with the dialogue
That Shade fella never know when to quit. And I wonder if Voduisant was really beaten so easily.
This had me going nuts with DBZ fever Best Chapter ever best read ever I loved it so much he even had his own version of a Super Saiyan and he did a Kamehameha wave.
6885215 Thanks. It was really fun to write. I'm glad it came out as well as it did
Hopefully chapter five comes out soon
6945792 Did you mean six?
6946464 crap
Let's rephrase that: hopefully chapter 6 comes out
6946801 lol it will. Just been busy taking care of the family. Wife had surgery so I'm mr. Mom
Tyrion Lannister is awesome.