Just how many are coming in? thought Archnea as she welcomed in another monster.
"You look like you could use a break," Eclipse said slithering up to Archnea, "I'll take over here, you can go improve the rest of Ponyville."
"I can't thank you enough," Archnea said with relief. "Is thank one of the elements of harmony?" She asked pointing to the necklace Eclipse had in her hoof.
"It used to be, if you put it on, it'll make you stronger, Oh and can you give them all to the others?" Eclispe said handing the necklace to Archnea.
"Thank you my queen, and I will," Archnea said as she went off.
I wonder why Pinkie isn't here? Thought Mr. Cake as he prepared some candy for the customers out side. Mrs. Cake was on holiday along with the foals. Violet decided that it would be best to make Mr. Cake go out side before improving him. Mr. Cake never takes time off of work, so I have to lure him out somehow, Thought Violet as she watched Mr. Cake work. Oh, I know I can just pull him out side with my skeletons. She flicked her hoof and Skeleton limbs ripped out of the ground forcing Mr. Cake to go outside without being able to say a word.
"Hel-" was all he was able to scream before he lost feeling in his head. Then is neck. Then is lungs. Then is legs. Then his hooves. He was dead, and as his body shattered. He was brought back as a spirit made of darkness.
Violet felt a rush of power as her hoof grew and became a scythe. Witch then detached itself from her hoof. At the same time her cloak grew.
"Weclome to the kingdom, Spirit," Violet said as she dragged out the customer Mr. Cake was just serving,
"Thank you for the greeting," Spirit said as a mark appeared of a scythe cut though a cake.
"Your welcome, now then, Archnea, it looked like you had something to say," Violet said as she turned and faced her.
"Master wanted to give this to you, do you mind if I take this one?" The archne said tossing the element of obsession to Violet.
"Thank you, and not at all," Archnea grinned as the helpless pony could do nothing as web was spun around her. Then the pony formerly known as Ditsy slowly turned into a Archne, She grew more legs and her tail became a sack.
Archnea felt power flow though her as the element of vanity's metal en-tagged itself with her legs.
"How do you feel, Climb?" Archnea asked.
"Great, am I free to go to the everfree?" replied Climb as a mark of bubbles wrapped in web appeared.
"Yes," replied Archnea said. She looked around and realized Violet must have left.
so when a new chapter going to be?
5067781 I am going to rewrite the current chapters first
5067791 okay byway did you see my last comment about my idea?
5062861 I did not get a report?
5072723 Cadance is still around.
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and what will she do?, love them until they barf the transformation?
5075450 I never said it would happen. It is a possibility.
5075527 yeah i think she will fail beacuse if Celestia have fall even Discord, what makes us believe that Cadence was any difrent?
5075614 Crystal Heart
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and Celestia had 1000+ years of expirience and training (well not that kind of training) to confront evil threat's to Equestria and look her now, kneel-bowing to her once known star student.
tee hee ha ha ha!!! That's soooo funny!
How are you guys liking the rewrites?
5081267 Is good so when are you going to be done of rewrites and doing a next chapter?
Wait a second, what will Cadence be?
I did some edits to some of the chapters. Also, I am working on the next chapter and more rewrites that should be out by monday at the latest
Do you guys think I should change Archnea's (Rarity's) name?
5104290 No.
5104873 Kay
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5110468 Thank you
5113728 Thank you for the advice, I just got a new editor so the typos should be fixed soon
noooo derpy..........:(
5405660 Actually, Ditzy being Derpy is just a common misunderstanding.