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Gotta say I didn't expected Discord to reveal how the Princesses achieved immortality, but at least Carter seems to have gotten over his depression by the end of the chapter. Thank you, hope to see more.
A bit but something tells me that Discord gave him a little trick in that drink
6680051 very real possibility to make him immortal to be with Celestia (maybe somehow cure his sterility as well)
I do so like this story. Sad, a bit. But I think it's following the Stages of Grief quite nicely.
Can't wait for more
You know what sucks? I'm pretty sure the story is gonna end soon after he dies or becomes immortal. I mean, what else would there be for him to overcome? If he's dead he's gone, and if he's immortal he's won!
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3 words
-Celestia will you marry me
-I'm going to be a dad
-Chrysalis condition worsening
-Chrysalis condition stabilising
-Negotiation with Chrysalis
-More human secrets discover
-More humans appearing
-Side effects from becoming inmortal
take your pick there are more
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I can imagine Discord even do it without anyone asking, and mostly because its just to much interesting to see everything unravel, the chaos that could bring, he becomes the inmortal, the route of what that leaves him, the confusion of Celestia not knowing if thank or yell at him, it will be just like the ep with Discord when he try to teach a lesson to Twilight
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That's more than three words.
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Ok, I admit that was my bad but you get the idea
Sounds like some shady shit. Celestia kept that immortality stuff from him, he's definately being used. If it were me, I'd spite the hell out of her and give my blood to a ton of ponies so she'd have immortal horsies all over the place before I died.
Or I'd die somewhere I couldn't be harvested for my blood. Still not quite sure what she's after here. Keeping him from others or using him to raise others?
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Sure.
If it were me ask discord to bring my body after I passed
6680429 didn't discord say that she doesn't know that it was human blood in her life elixr?
6684377 nah nah. I'm just talking in the voice. When I read him I hear High Laurie (American Accent)
My question to every one of my friends and family who ever read my stories...
6850467 Yea, the first chapter needs to be rewritten. I'm planning on doing it after the story's done.
I really hope you're continuing this story it is very enjoyable
6900256 I am, there are a lot of thing on my plate at the moment. Sorry.
6901614 thanks. there's no need to hurry I just wanted to know if it was still being continued
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Still drown in things on your plate? or next chapter might come up soon?
That chapter title and this conent... wheeeeew man...
Yes it was sad... so damn good job, can't wait for more!
Jesus this is sad. Well I'm tired. Continue this pls
more?
Glorious! What a twist after twist! I love it!
This story is brilliant.
I really hope this isn't dead. One of my all time favourites.
Hmm. Elixir of Life. Gryphon Assassin. Blood on knife... Oh no. Oh no, no, no, no. This is bad. Like, real bad. The Gryphons are trying to remake the Elixir. But then again. Human Blood. Elixir of Life... But would that work? Sure it worked on Celestia and Luna, but Carter? This is heavy doc. Still, why kill Carter? What benefit would come of it for either of the two races? The Gryphons would no longer be able to make the Elixir, and the Ponies would lose a dear friend. So why kill him if not for the dramatic flare? Also, no more sex for Carter. If what I understand about blood is correct, the more his heart pumps, the faster the magi cells will spread. And nothing gets the heart pumping like a romp in the hay
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...commie-demon...