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Shadows Reborn


When you feel you lost the right path start from the beginning and try a different course.

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Ohhh I see Im starting to pop up more....
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If you do not approve I will use you less often. But as one of the supporters of the original I thought even if not in combat you should have some kind of role or mentioning. But if that does bother you please let me know the I.D.D.B. was created for a fun blood feud. One I can get to know other characters through there O.C.s and get creative with them provided they do not gun me down for it.:ajsleepy: I mean it will happen Faustin I already told me my characters role in it all is way to over powered.:pinkiesad2: Sorry to anger you if you don't like your role I will take it down and edit it out. I am not here to make enemies I just wish to write a new fun way of creating action pact brutal stories...:pinkiesad2::ajsleepy:

4998694 Oh I love my role dude dont take it out! :pinkiehappy:

...Wow... This was...AWESOME!
That ending btw...

Suddenly a tall dark figure casts a shadow upon him. Lord Khaos gazes down upon him with glowing eyes. “I am fucked aren’t I?” His vision goes black as hand grasps his face.

Priceless! Oh, and is Brutal Jack a member on Fimfiction? I'd so love to meet him!

5001238 Yeah he is in the abyss right now Maxii.

HEY JACK GET OVER HERE!

Yes lord khaos?

Say hi to Maxii the person who kicked your ass!

OH THAT *BLEEP*?! HEY *BLEEP*ING MAXII *BLEEP* YOU YOU PEACE OF *BLEEP* YOU DIRTY SON OF A *BLEEP*ING VAMPIRE YOU STUPID *BLEEP BLEEP BLEEP BLEEP* IM GONNA SHOVE MY FOOT UP YOUR *BLEEP*ING *BLEEP BLEEP BLEEP* I'M GONNA KILL YOU!

HEY! DON'T TALK TO ROYALTY LIKE THAT YOU FILTHY *BLEEP* Yeah sorry about him he is on his period well nice seeing you have a good day Maxii!

Progection turns off

5001238 Sorry Maxii Brutal Jack, is my younger brother and though he likes the series and watches it with me from time to time. That is about the extent. He read my first death brawl and want to make a O.C. to fight in one my story. So I let him submit it off sight. My brother who I shall not name for security reason you under stand *cough, cough* Jared, *cough* sorry bug in my throat. He gave me a bio and I wrote a story. Now as far personality if he is in a good mood he is fine and fun to hang around. Any other kind of mood complete ass level infinity. Oh he has very little love for Vampires... I blame the Twilight movies... He cant stand them... But I will ask him to get on a chat with you for a bit when I can. P.S. I would love it if you would join the roster for Dimensional Death Brawl if you have not already. your O.C. was just very fun to work with.

:rainbowkiss:that ........was.....AWSOME!!! i cant wait for the next installment and hey if you want i can give you another realm to play in

5007334 Oh Darkbrony you are a mind reader from the deepest darkest pits of hell. I was considering opening another forum in the group page marked venues. People can submit custom areas and worlds I will use my Dimensional presence to forge them into the multiverse. I do not have it open yet but once it is set I will message you I love the idea and considering you offered. I got see come through now. The Dimensional Death Brawl is growing very nicely indeed.

5007299 Okay. Your brother sounds a lot like mine. Though, he actually WANTS to join the site. (I don't really want him to. Don't want him to see the level of crazy I cause ;3)

5007240 *laughs cockily and waves to Jack mockingly* Heeeey, bro what's up?

5007419 Craziness...:pinkiesad2:Cookie I am hurt... That Craziness is what fuels my insanity... Besides he can look to me as a friend should he find himself in a dark place. *Sinister smile*

5007478 HAHAHA! Jack will be safe here I am just bugging the hell out of him thats all XD

5007478 *grins and laugh* I'm sure of you will.

I loved this :pinkiesmile: I can't wait for the next one

5010798 Thank you glad you liked it....
A note to all Insanity Dimensional Death Brawl seems to be getting some attention... Thank you everyone another death brawl will be appearing soon

I must say, it's not all that bad. I mean no offence when I ask if you have an editor. I have come to notice that there are a good deal of errors in this story and other posts. One of the main issues I see here is that you keep changing from past tense to present then back to past, try to pick one tense and stick with it. Asides from the spelling issues it is a good story. I'll check the next ones. Until next time,
-Sphinx

5023146 No... No editor... Sadly one of many things I expect to her is how bad my grammar is. I could give you a thousand excuses but... I am not that type of guy, all I can say is I will try harder to catch them... *Sigh* I got to get this shit straightened out...

5023178 It's not that bad, I used to have many of the same problems. I got an editor for the first few chapters of my story and learned from my mistakes. I'm sure you'll fix it well enough. On a side not, nice avatar.

P.S.

...I expect to her is how bad my grammar...

I believe the word you're looking for is hear.

Until next time,
-Sphinx

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