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BewhoUr


I don't care if you're black, white, bisexual, straight, gay, lesbian, short, tall, fat, skinny, rich, or poor. If you're nice to me, I'll be nice to you. Simple as that.

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One day when flying about in the clear blue skys of ponyville, Rainbow dash spys 6 black crows. And, not being the "uncool," type, she throws superstition to the wind. Dang, how she wished that there weren't six crows in the sky. Those stupid, stupid, stupid crows.

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Comments ( 10 )

This is really well written and it gave me the feels. I cried. So much. I only wish it were longer, with more detail and maybe a better ending. But I want more sad dark stories from you. You're really good at writing them!

4981298
Thanks for your opinion, I try to edit as best as I can, but it was late and I was tired. Thanks so much for telling me, I may continue with something about the cmc and their sisters reunion when Dash, Rarity, and AJ die. Thanks for reading and giving it a chance :twilightsmile:

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Aww! Thanks so much! I'll admit, I did cry when typing it, and I probably will continue. Its so good to know that I didn't totally fail at a dark/tragedy story, and I am aiming to write more of these, thank you so much for reading! :pinkiehappy:

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My little tragedy:
feels are magic :fluttershbad: Thanks for reading!

This... this is almost as sad as when I had to stop adventuring

THE MEMORIES OH GOD STOP THE MEMORIES

I enjoyed most of it except for the suicide part. I have no respect for individuals who take that route, unless they are doing it to save someone else's life. Other than that, nicely written.

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