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Theblondeknight


Pfft...Any idiot could do that <proceeds to fail doing that>

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Starswirl the Bearded was wise, powerful, adored, and obviously, very famous. He lived his life to its fullest potential and did all he could learn the hidden truths of the land that had just been named Equestria. He had but one regret. His best friend, his only true friend, disagreed about the fate of a land unknown, and as a result, that bond was broken forever...and so too was his desire to make any friend ever again.

A one-shot about Starswirl's past.

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Comments ( 9 )

I like it, especially how Starswirls friend was right.......

Not a huge problem because you have the AU tag, but...

"I'm so sorry about that...the two of you are wonderful students and excellent leaders...

In canon Starswirl is Celestia's student, not the other way around.

4973237 Yes....well...I'm fairly certain that in show canon the Crystal Empire was never almost destroyed by a wizard named Stormdark either but.....we'll just run with it all :derpytongue2:

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The difference is that part was influencial to the plot, while who was who's student was not. You don't have a reason to change it.

4975369 ....We'll look past it all.....
geesh...:applejackunsure:

I must say this was a great story. Excellently crafted and well written. I don't think I've found any fanfic of a better detailed fight scene.:rainbowkiss:
I was about to finish reading and with one single scroll I saw the name of the kid and was covered in goosebumps.:twilightsmile:

4996747 Thank you! It's great to have nice users like you tell me how good (or bad) I've done. I appreciate it. :pinkiesmile:

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