After stealing the Crucible Dr. Samuel Hayden sends the Doom Marine somewhere he can't interfere. Neither of them expected that place to be Equestria. Or that demons would show up there too. The ponies are about to see a lot of ripping and tearing.
Twilight Sparkle travels to Canterlot seeking justice. When one of her friends is taken captive, Twilight sets out with spell and sword to save her. (Sequel to The Sword Coast, inspired by the Baldur’s Gate series)
Yeah. I don't blame you if you don't like it. This is why I write stories in the afternoon because when I'm tired, it's impossible for me to be serious. Sorry. I promise that I won't write my chapters in the morning ever again.
Is this an Elements of Insanity story? If not, what is it?
Not bad for your first, I suppose...write more soon please!!
Also, could add more sensory details, please.
The last chapter felt like dark comedy...
I find this strangely satisfying ... ...
Gotta downvote, was sorta interesting, but then it fell flat. Sorry not sorry. But keep trying. You do show some promise.
Yeah. I don't blame you if you don't like it. This is why I write stories in the afternoon because when I'm tired, it's impossible for me to be serious. Sorry. I promise that I won't write my chapters in the morning ever again.
That ending was.... Abrupt.