• Member Since 28th Aug, 2014
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ponya413


My dad's a Sci-fi freak and my mom is a fantasy geek. You do the math.

Comments ( 10 )

Is this an Elements of Insanity story? If not, what is it?

Not bad for your first, I suppose...write more soon please!!

Also, could add more sensory details, please.

Comment posted by ponya413 deleted Aug 31st, 2014
Comment posted by ponya413 deleted Aug 31st, 2014

The last chapter felt like dark comedy...

I find this strangely satisfying :unsuresweetie: ... :facehoof: ... :moustache:

Gotta downvote, was sorta interesting, but then it fell flat. Sorry not sorry. But keep trying. You do show some promise.

Yeah. I don't blame you if you don't like it. This is why I write stories in the afternoon because when I'm tired, it's impossible for me to be serious. Sorry. I promise that I won't write my chapters in the morning ever again.

That ending was.... Abrupt.

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