Luna's good experience with dating leads her to want to share her happiness with Twilight Sparkle.
Written for the Fifth Bimonthly Twilestia is Bestia contest on the forums. This contest's theme is "Luna the Shipper"
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The puns! Good Celestia, the puns!
But this was adorable beyond all reason!
Sweet Celestia, the puns.
I suddenly have the strangest craving for tea...
Awesome. The puns!
We do not appreciate what thou hast done. We will also let thou know... WE HATE THE PUNS!
Twilight Solo
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Like your avatar?
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Who doesn't love a bit of Fluttergoth?
4923464 Missed a couple.
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4923593 I try.
4925688 Hmmm, but where would the story go from here?
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Yeah, I can't find any more.
This is hilarious AND cute.
I see that the training grounds of the collab have made you strong, fast, hard! It is as was foretold!
*squee sound* So adorbz!
4926317 maybe show how Twilestia happened and the double date.
4926794 I promise you, the training grounds have not made me 'hard.'. Nudge, nudge, wink, wink.
4926868 Hmmmm, that is certainly a thing that could happen, I shall keep it in mind.
4926538 The last one I wrote on purpose is a bit subtler
4927053 I like to think of this as snippets of the pillow fight.
Tea puns and Twilestia? Huzzah!
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Morons.
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Apart from a few misuses of commas, great story!
4928133 If it isn't too much trouble, mind pointing a couple out? My grammar is not top notch and I don't even know what a comma splice is.
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(never thought I'd encounter that)
And Lunardash
4928181 A comma splice is when someone tries to combine two sentences with a comma.
The above quote demonstrates the comma splice. Also, you may want to read the writing guide section on dialogue; it gives good tips about using action tags. For example, the sentence below could be improved.
The writing guide can be accessed from a drop-down menu that appears when you hover over the FAQ selection in the user navigation pane. It's easy to find, and a big help on grammar, punctuation, and even some story basics. Everyone who uses the site should at least look at it.
4928371 Ok, I can keep the comma splice stuff in mind in the future, but I honestly see nothing wrong with the second sentence you have quoted.
And here I was... thinking this to be a 2girls1cup reference...
4928397 That's because you didn't take my advice and look at the writing guide. That sentence should look more like this.
This link should explain. [link]
While you're at it, check out the rest of the guide if you see anything you might need help with; at the top of the page there is a table of contents with links to the different sections.
4928486 You know, I skimmed that thing before I even wrote the story. It didn't have anything I didn't look to have anything I hadn't learned in English class. I'm just bad at reading my own writing for flaws. Sorry I'm not that good, but I DID skim the stupid guide.
Edit: And I'm bad with commas. Oh well.
4928596 That's okay, no one's perfect. I just see these things, I guess. From now on when I see a section of the guide that will help someone, I will ask if they have read the section. I will also paraphrase it instead of linking it to be sure they understand, or recommend they read the section closer if they already haven't. Wouldn't want to offend someone; after all, I just want to help people.
4928624 If I sound snippy, it's only because I did skim the guide. I just obviously missed that specific section and was going off of my AGES old english/creative writing class knowledge. So the snippiness is more: "How did I screw that up!" (Did I punctuate that right? I doubt it.
)
I can see where I messed that sentence up now. It's just, ya know, I wrote the stuff, so for errors like that, I should have gotten a second set of eyes on it. Live and learn!
Okay, this was hilarious.
I especially loved when Twilight told Celestia she would not Shining Armor Luna. So now the "not telling about dating until sending the wedding invite" has become a "running don't" tied to him? That's funny!
Especially when it comes to drugs.
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I reviewed this!
Shining Armor is a verb now. Verbs are cool.
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And I read it because of it. Thanks to you both.
4930829 o.O Why would you go and do a thing like that?
Thanks though! Appreciate the critique.
Honeyhoneyhoney's Summary Recap
"remember its luna,its just a phase." I am hoping that givin the rather large amount of punning in this that the line there was intentional.
soooooo many puns.
damn fun read.
This deserves a like just for the picture
4933810 That is kinda my favorite line.
4934229 I'm very fond of it.
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That, uh, isn't what I wrote. I'm glad you liked it though!
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Big Sis! Be honest.
Luna = Learn a...
"Puns!!"
4933810 OMG I missed that one, but hot damn its good.
4935135 I did really enjoy your summary.
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Awe shucks, AJ.
Ah guess yer a good teacher.
I lost it at 'Mr. Tea'.
Well done! Have my upvote, and a moustache, besides~! 
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4937601 It depends. What type are we talkin?
I don't even care how great the story was - which it was. Those puns, you should feel ashamed of yourself.
You're a monster!
Look what you've done, you've made Fluttershy cry. Look you fiend!
4937608 all drugs are bad mmkay