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Discord.. He wants all mares.. He gets all mares..

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Sarah Bule, Annabelle Betram, and Sandra Lenard fall into the pony world. Discord strikes up a conversation with them, and finds out some information that might serve useful.. Later on.


Quick story. Click here for more information about the girls.

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Comments ( 22 )
Kovy #1 · Aug 29th, 2014 · · 2 ·

This is the most bullshit filled story I ever read. Bad grammer and spelling.

Trollfic off the starboard bow, cap'n!

Comment posted by Dat Juan Pon3y deleted Aug 29th, 2014

I need to read cupcakes again to slap some sense back into me :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

This story has some major problems. 1. Why is Discord on Earth in the first place? And, if the CMC where watching the season 4 final, how are they only now being put into the show? Why did Discord not return them home? besides the plot problems, the CMC react to everything oddly. A creature from a TV show just broke into your room, WHY are you talking to him!? And even if that doesn't scare them, the fact that they saw this guy lock their favorite ponies in a cage should.

4924347 Don't even fucking start.

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1. Discord isn't on Earth. The CMC are in Equestria.
2. Same question I had when writing it. :pinkiegasp: Ya know, it never got answered.
3. Discord does what he wants. He didn't want to return them home.
4. How would you react if a 200-pound dragon/horse started talking to you? :trixieshiftleft: Probably not like me.. I would frickin' hug the crap out of Discord if I met him.
5. Once again, he didn't break into their room, they broke into his world. :moustache:
6. I think that they were scared by the, ya know, screaming in the first part?
7.

"Let her down you traitor!"

They weren't scared that their favorite ponies got locked up. They were more mad. :trixieshiftleft:

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Everyone's reaction to this story.

4925256 Ha! :rainbowlaugh: You wish. You're feedback makes me laugh so much! God, I think I'm gonna cry. :yay:

4925339 your story makes people die

4924956 Oh, okay, got it. But, why are they in Equestria? Did Discord bring them there? Mabye it's only me, but I would panic if I saw Discord in real life, even if he is my favorite :)

4925892 this was made buy a father whom probly had his doughter write for the sit.

Dudd Dwyer reacted to this story badly.

And don't think about deleting comments or you comment section will be full as fuck.

4926196 God, guy! I only was trying to give some constructive criticism to what I thougth was a writer only starting off. DON'T threaten me with making my comment section "full as fuck", you skag!

4925735 Well, too bad for them. I ain't comin' to there funeral! :rainbowwild:

4925892 During the dream, something happened that brought them to Equestria.

4926196

this was made buy a father whom probly had his doughter write for the sit.

Dudd Dwyer reacted to this story badly.

And don't think about deleting comments or you comment section will be full as fuck.

*This was made *by a father whom *probably has his *daughter write for the sit.

*And don't think about deleting comments, or your comment section will be full as fuck.

Think about your spelling before you post something. :raritywink:

Nooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The CMC aint humans!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:fluttercry::fluttercry:

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