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Of Reminiscence

The sorrow of a unicorn's saturated, isolated self brings her to recall the past when she last encountered the Princess'

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DrunkenClouds54

DrunkenClouds54 #1 · Apr 25th, 2012 · 1 · · Of Reminiscence ·

Shouldn't this have a Sad tag?

Equestrian Wyvern

Equestrian Wyvern #2 · Apr 25th, 2012 · · · Of Reminiscence ·

Hmmm.... The story concept seems interesting and shows some promise, though it could use some revisions as the word choice and phrasing was a bit off from time to time. (not going to bog this comment down just listing errors, but particularly the very important line of Celestia revealing her not being immortal doesn't make any sense as its currently phrased. I suspect you were aiming for something more along the lines of "no pony lives forever." with that line)